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jimvfx

10-21-2009, 12:41 PM

Hi

ALL

This is jimmy from India. I am freelance vfx compositor.....This is my first mattepainting

i did. wanted to share it with u all comments are welcome :blush:

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4353/mattev03.jpg

Thanks for watching
jimmy~

JJASSO

10-21-2009, 10:59 PM

hey, this is a pretty cool matte, nice composition and well done, I think the blur in the background pyramid is too much, and there are some other elements that are blury as well that should not be blured, maybe the sky could be better with more interesting clouds than the ones you have
great work !

ramk27

10-23-2009, 02:31 AM

Overall good comopostion.yeh some of elements are blurred and some elements are sharp.I think second pyramid slightly change better,suddenly it looks mirror shapes.Then birds scale too big. some perspective problem in sky too flat.Thats it buddy.Overall nice execution..Way to go..

Ram.

dellis

10-23-2009, 08:11 PM

Hey that looks like Niagara Falls...shot on the Canadian side! The base picture i mean.

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