elfin girl

[tyio]

windows is against me :surprised

http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/jlh/jlh2.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/jlh/jlh3.jpg

[tyio]

here new test on the head, i have change the iteration on surface from 4 to 1 and put a messmooth, because i can't attache the head with her body but now, i will !!

and some mouth pb are resolved.
Still some work on the texture (notally spec)
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/jlh/jlh4.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/jlh/jlh5.jpg

(the first who says she looks like britney :'( )

[tyio]

always 0 answer....

[Lukashi]

Ok, this is pretty good work, but there are some things not so good, like the eyebrows, the lips look a little weird too, might be the chin, if you used britney as a reference then get some 45 degree shots and compare your model to her, the eyelashes also need to be done better, the top row looks ok but the bottom is too long and straight, the eyes look a little bit off too try playing with different reflection maps

Anyways keep going :) its a good start just needs some tweaks!

[tyio]

thanks for you reply !!

I don't use Britney as reference, but it look like, so...

The eyeslash, i know how i can improve them but i don't know how to make eyebrow with shag hair/fur, i success to make big eyebrow but for pretty girl, i faill so, if you habe some good advertice !!

for the lips, you thinks the lower is too little ?? (i guess)

[Bonstar]

It looks promising so far... but I think that you should definately thicken up the lower lip, and shorten the lower eyelashes. Maybe you should also try to make the nose a little shorter.

Also, she is supposed to be an elf??? Then you should maybe lengthen her face a little and give her pointed ears.

So far I like it... keep up the good work!

[tyio]

she is an elfin, an half elfe is you want :) but i want to make her the most lovely face i can !!, i'll discrease the up eyelash and increase the lower !!

Thanks !!

[mora]

hi tyio, are you going for a realistic or semi real look to the character? because she looks cartoony:wavey:

you might've drawn some ref pics?

[tyio]

hi mora! !

No, i'm trying to make her the most realistic than possible, but what make you think it's a cartoonist girl ??

for ref pic, i have found some good pic in britney spears site (i'm sorry, i haven't find other site :))

[mora]

tyio,if you wanna make a realistic girl,you must fix her jaw line,the area between the end of the jaw and the ear:)

[tyio]

ok, the britney touch is over, next step into the elfin world, so here two pic, i guess you know my model, need works on spec map but it begin to be nice (better in fact :))

http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lily1.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lily2.jpg

[Aldaryn]

Wow, You've played with WC3 too much! ;)
Looking nice, but some work around the eyes, and the mouth should be done, for e.g opening them. However, I really like the eyeless one! Kinda kreepy, and shocking, just add some scars where the eye should be, and voilá!

The eyebrow is way too dense, look in the mirror, it's a great reference when creating body hair. And examine the different alignement of the hairs on your brow, or just examine it an the Blizzard cover design portraits....
The facial bump and specular map is getting to be pretty cool, but the lips need some work on that too... Or the lips are just too small... I don't know...

Keep it up!

- A.

[tyio]

here the first shot with body, if it look strange, it's normal, but tell me where !!!

for the lips, i don't know where it's too small but i guess you're right

http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lily3.jpg

[tyio]

little shot of where the thing will be, but not fixed yet

http://membres.lycos.fr/Eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lily5.jpg

[tyio]

ok, tyio's come back !

NEW head !

http://membres.lycos.fr/Eltyio/3dsmax/jlh/jlhv2.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/Eltyio/3dsmax/jlh/jlhv21.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/Eltyio/3dsmax/jlh/jlhv22.jpg

[Terro]

I like the face texture idea. I'm working on a nighelf too. It's starting to look like the Nightelf from Warcraft so your on the right track. Still think it needs tweaks here and there before you start painting her though. I would make the ear a little more longer and pitched back more, not up. Ohh and the temple area next to the eyyes is a bit to wide. Makes her face look a bit fatty. But great progress, cant wait to see her finished.

[tyio]

thanks :thumbsup:

She already finish, but the head doesn't the elfe touch !, so i made it once, then twice......

Ok, the area between two eyes, are definitly to wide !, i update this, and show you the body and clothes next post

[tyio]

here some head's adjustment, and the body, of course

http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lili.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lili2.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lili3.JPG

[FLOw]

fantastic updates :)

[tyio]

ups !!!

she'll have a caps


http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lili6.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax/elfe/lili5.JPG

[Terro]

Very nice progress Tyio, good job on making the eyes bigger

[tyio]

here some new updates, new hair cut, and some new jewellery !

critiques and tips requested!!


http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax//elfe/lili7.JPG
http://membres.lycos.fr/eltyio/3dsmax//elfe/lili8.JPG

[FLOw]

eyebrows are a bit thick..and the ear is quite low-detail (I hate to model ears so I understand)..and maybe not elf-y enough? :)

nah but its cool, keep it up :)

[tyio]

ok, the ear will be remodelled so !

For eyebrow, i always have pb, i'll try to c hange color, maybe it'll pass better

[Atwooki]

Hey tyio!

Great progress on the second head :)

See if you can't try getting the corners of the mouth to fold back into the 'fleshy' part of the cheek, like this:

http://www.custom3d.co.uk/images/3d_art/teen_render.jpg

easier to show the model, than to describe :)

Also, maybe emphasise the cheekbones a tad?

Atwooki

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