Animation Demo Reel and website

[robcat2075]

There's some good spots there.

The first shot of the baby carriage is framed so close I didn't know it was a baby carriage until I figured out he was trying to steal a sucker... from a baby... who must be in... a baby carriage. You need a wider establishing shot.



The leap off the stairs looks like it's got a mid air halt in it or some other similar arc problem.

[Jeremydjutras]

pretty nice stuff.

On the first shot, I was a little confused it was a baby carriage as well. the camera change will help. Maybe sell the baby more by having it "cooing" and shaking the lollypop until it is grabbed.

With the phone scene, the camera cut is a little jarring, maybe switch it to cutting when he pauses after he realizes the phone is ringing. You have it keyed to switch while the character is performing a nice arc, switch before this arc and that way it will be seen through camera 2.

The box lift is good I just think the hands slap onto the box too quickly.

Keep at it, with thee changes, it will be a solid reel!

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