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Danne26
10-07-2009, 08:19 PM
Hey everybody!

My first post!!! Okey so I am practicing on some basics.
Very new to animation so I decided to make a jumping ball, just to start
somewhere...

Well anyway here it is


http://www.vimeo.com/6944639


Any comments or something I should reconsider????
Feedback would be highly appreciated :)
Danne26
10-08-2009, 05:23 PM
Okey so I made some progress I hope!
Here is a updated version if my jumping ball! :)

http://www.vimeo.com/6965897

Any comments???
Nickray3d
10-09-2009, 02:43 PM
its a good start so far. The anticipation is really good but maybe make it stretch a little once its in the air and I'd have bounce a tad bit when it hits the ground and then finish with the nicely done jiggle that you currently have. Hope this helps
Paul B
10-09-2009, 07:11 PM
Looks good to me in that the "feel" of the ball seems very consistent (easy to imagine it's composition). I could only suggest changing the acting a bit. The squash antic seems cartoonishly too long. I'd do the "up" antic, hold it for a beat then down quick and jump for the first couple jumps but save the really big squash antic for some kind of really big, wacky jump at the end.
shadermonkey
10-10-2009, 06:15 AM
I'm no animator, but for what it's worth that looks really good. Very easy to believe it.
I love the "up" antic. Very cute stuter in the beginning. Overall, well executed. Can;t wait to see ur next work.

Best of luck.

- JD
Danne26
10-10-2009, 01:34 PM
Hey!

Thanks for the feedback!!! :)
Yeah some really good points that I will try to work
on and I will post an update very soon!
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