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tumbi
08-12-2003, 01:54 PM
finaly my first finished work with Lightwave and moving to the next one. i hope you will enjoy it :beer:

http://graphilla.bunchofpixels.com/tumbi/en.jpg

Jovi
08-12-2003, 01:59 PM
I'm looking forward to your second work, good start!:):beer:

tumbi
08-12-2003, 02:11 PM
little close up
http://graphilla.bunchofpixels.com/tumbi/close2.jpg

bgermain
08-12-2003, 03:59 PM
The lighting and textures look great except for the gray concrete curb at the bottom of your wide shot. It's too clean, not enough variety in the coloring. Try adding some stains and a random sprinkling of grit; maybe even a crack or a seam (especially if there's a fire hydrant nearby).

That rust on the hydrant kicks ass. I'd like to know how you achieved that: scanned image? photoshop? multi-layered shader?

tumbi
08-12-2003, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by bgermain
................ That rust on the hydrant kicks ass. I'd like to know how you achieved that: scanned image? photoshop? multi-layered shader?

only Lightweave Procedural textures - 5 for BUMP, 3 for Color , 1 for Specular - nothing else like Weight map, Surface mixer ..........

phishmann
08-12-2003, 11:12 PM
i think this piece may work better if you were to maybe move the hydrant off of the center of the image. its not really to interesting with it just sitting in the middle of the image. and maybe add a bit more contrast.

Arab Queen
08-13-2003, 01:48 AM
wow!
nice job!:applause:

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