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nethken
10-06-2009, 09:09 AM
Hi everyone, need some critiques!

I think I'm getting close to the end on this image, but I want to push it further. My main problem is, it feels like something is missing. I have tried adding an extra tree to the composition - 2nd image - but I am worried about loosing the feel of space and freedom that the image portrays without the 2nd tree, if that makes sense. So I want to maintain the feeling of openness and add something to harmonise and balance the image. Any suggestions?

Also any general crits would be most appreciated. I still have some work to do on the background and the hamster thing. Im also thinking of adding another rabbit or two...

Thanks in advance

Ken :D

http://www.charactercube.com/imgs/portfolio/il/kennethanderson_illustration_001.jpg

http://www.charactercube.com/imgs/portfolio/il/kennethanderson_illustration_001x.jpg

tarik3d
10-06-2009, 09:37 AM
This is great :) maybe painting something in to show where the rabbit is going, either a bush to try and frame it at the bottom or a rabbit hole in the back ground on the left maybe.

nethken
10-06-2009, 09:40 AM
Thank you for the feedback Tarik! Perhaps a bush in the bottom left would work nicely - Ill try it out :)

tarik3d
10-06-2009, 09:45 AM
Np, just looked at your website, its good :) I like concept image 7

nethken
10-06-2009, 10:14 AM
Thanks for checking out my website, I had a look at yours also. You have superb 3d skills!

TobyArt
10-22-2009, 02:46 AM
I agree with the bush for the rabbit to run to, you may also be able to use bg clouds to fill some of the empty space. And also great work on your site, fun stuff!

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