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mattowens
08-12-2003, 09:51 AM
Please write and comms and crits for my latest effort. This is my first attempt at modelling a head and is based on my ugly mug. Im not sure about the proportions, esp the width of the face[/IMG] :thumbsup:

Crits more than welcome.

http://europa.your-site.com/~matt3d/1.jpg
[IMG]http://europa.your-site.com/~matt3d/2.jpg

Rotamus
08-12-2003, 10:17 AM
hey that looks pretty kool :thumbsup:
there seems to be some minor mesh wrinkles but i think its looking pretty sweet.... maybe make the lower lip a little fatter

anywayz keep it up and post a wire if ya cant fix the errors in ya mesh

willow408
08-12-2003, 10:46 AM
really good start, the only crit i gotta give is maybe more of an indication of brow ridge. the upper portion of the nose receeds then the brow ridge comes out...maybe its just they view though....great strat, i like the eyes:thumbsup:

Pufferfish
08-12-2003, 11:41 AM
Eye lids looks a bit flat but maybe it is because of the camera and lighting...

But great start for your first head!.. I wonder if I ever will start one :)

let us see some more...

mattowens
08-12-2003, 12:03 PM
http://europa.your-site.com/~matt3d/2.jpg

Another render to check the proportions when lit from above. Will post more work when I get some done tonight. Im thinking about refining the eyelids and creating a brow & more prominent bridge of nose.

mattowens
08-12-2003, 07:57 PM
Hey, another update. Spent an 1/2 an hour or so tweaknig final adjustments. Comments more than welcome.

http://europa.your-site.com/~matt3d/head_final_02.jpg

P.s. Does anyone know where I can find some reactor tutorials? I am interested to find out whether you can perform a simulation with an animated character and how to approach this

cheers:thumbsup:

Pufferfish
08-12-2003, 10:07 PM
yes yes... looking better :thumbsup:

The eyes are great now.
Can you show us another angle? Would be easier to comment more.

mattowens
08-13-2003, 10:32 AM
Cheers pufferfish, will post some new angles and a wire this evening

Gregwid
08-13-2003, 11:35 AM
Yes more angles,I think as of now in this early state it's pretty good.Perhaps the inner eye sockets could have less space?
But all in all pretty good.:)

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