View Full Version : 3d character: Walk in a snow (finished)
Here is a finished version of my project. This is what I am sending to a magazine. I have corrected everything that you have pointed on. Well, everyting that I was able to correct whithout starting from scratch. Thank you to everyone. I will be better next time, promise!
http://members.cox.net/icarriger/3d/lady_test_bw.jpg
http://members.cox.net/icarriger/3d/lady_test.jpg
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coldcurrent
08-11-2003, 09:24 PM
wow! the modelling is nice! texture is nice! everything nice!
just the fur of the hat and cloth... how to say...
hmmm... maybe u should texture those part also... coz it is a bit obvious that the fur is not enough to cover the surface...
sorry for my poor english... :P is that call fur?? or hair?? lol
Wow! Thank you! Did not expect to get such a nice comment!
liggat
08-12-2003, 01:21 AM
great done.. just one thing I can complain about
the left side around the ear is not looking good compared to the rest of the model.
otherwise, :thumbsup:
Well, I didn't know that somebody is going to be looking at her left ear... :blush: :p
bgermain
08-12-2003, 11:55 PM
Did you use any photoshop? She looks like a 2D/3D combo. By that I mean the nose looks all airbrushed and out of focus while the lips, eyes, and fur are very sharp. Also, and it could just be the lighting, the nose appears to be facing the camera while the rest of the head is at a 3/4 angle. The mouth looks a bit crooked, too, but I can't quite figure out why...
Yes, I did use Photoshop to do final touches. Earlier, I posted her with another texture and some people said that she looks like she just shaved. So, I did blured the texture a little.
I should not use 3d max anymore, it's just doesn't work for me.
Arab Queen
08-13-2003, 01:19 AM
WOoOoOoOoOoW!
cooooooooooooooooooooooooool:thumbsup:
I like it:eek:
good job:applause:
I just found out that I got an aword for this image on another web site. I know, it's not perfect, but I am so proud.
I am reading "The Fountanhead"... people that did read it understand that there are not too many people that don't need any proove from a public on how good they are... it's sad.
Gatling
08-13-2003, 03:14 PM
Her teeth look see-through, like the consinstency of plastic.
Otherwise, it's very good :thumbsup:
kr3ml
08-13-2003, 04:13 PM
:eek: she is so nice , very well done my friend :thumbsup:
I think just the fur need to be fixed , otherwise its awesome !
bgermain
08-13-2003, 05:37 PM
I think it's great that you won an award, no matter where it came from! Getting recognized is a morale-builder and a motivator. It's easy to get discouraged when your peers constantly shred your work (even though that's one reason why we all come here).
I have to disagree with an earlier comment about the teeth looking "plastic." Teeth are translucent and imo I think you did a good job of capturing that effect. The fur, however, does look a bit sparse and a little too uniform in length and direction.
Overall, I still think it's good work.
Thank you :) Your comment sounds very serious. Maybe because you have such serious image that represents you by your name :)
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