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QGrooms
10-02-2009, 02:58 PM
Hey everyone,
I'm a Full sail student working on my assets for my demo reel, and well I wanted to start getting some critiques outside of my teachers. So I'm timidly asking for any comments, criticisms, or critiques.
For this scene I wanted to have some really pompous professor saying something completely ridiculous during a PBS interview.
Anyway I hope you enjoy it.


http://www.vimeo.com/6851182
robcat2075
10-02-2009, 11:00 PM
The thing that immediately catches my eye is that his butt keeps wandering on the chair.

It might roll a bit as he shifts his weight around but not slide. Certainly not on a chair such as you have him sitting on.

Some interesting gestures, but they often seem to be missing the speech accent beat that they are aiming for.


As a "scene" it's lacking that change of emotion that helps make a really good dialog test.

Those are the things I see at a first look.
JesseDavis
10-06-2009, 03:27 AM
Your timing is very floaty and the pose transitions are practically all the same length of time. He's always moving and your poses aren't settling enough. Give more pause, less motion. And when you have motion, give it some character.

and what robcat said
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