An animated short

[mistasam02]

Sorry man, I don't get it. :shrug:Is it an environment modeling reel, or a short film? In either case I have some suggestions. The entire first minute was taken up by 2 title sequences, which you held for way too long. The majority of feature film titles pop on for 10 seconds or less, and they have a lot more going on. Next, your frame rate needs to be smoother. Flying through some of those landscapes was very jerky. The scenes themselves were pretty cool but seemed like someone could build them pretty quickly in Vue or Bryce (back in the day). The designs and color schemes are great, but they need more detail. Grass or trees or particles in the air.. something to make them look more interactive. It's a good start, but figure out where you're going with this (reel or short film) and focus on that. As a story it doesn't work, but as a reel it's almost there. Keep it up!

[TAVO]

it looks more like an enviroment reel.

The first minute was too long for titles.

EDIT: just noticed that Sam wrote the same comments, well that´s my view too.

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