wip-courtesan

[Alice]

youre off to a great start!
I started painting on top of your pic to figure out how it looked without the drawing, and maybe if you pulled in the left side a bit?

Im more confused over how the legs will come out and wich leg should be above the other.

Hope you dont mind me doodling on you beautiful girl.
cheers!
/Alice

[kamsvag]

It looks nice. You have some work to do to make it great, but it's an excelent start.

As the red cloth comes down to the floor it looks more like a liquid, you might wanna look into that before working any further on the picture, also, check her nose, it's abit wide on it's back...

I would also recomend you to show her left arm abit more, just an indication of the hand or something, would look more interesting.

These are just my opinion, but I suppose you want some opinions, why else post a picture in this forum, right?

Cheers!:thumbsup:

[kBg_Fiske]

I think your start is great, only thing might be the foreshortening of the thighs... looks a little off

[wildsheepchase]

Thanks for the replies!

Alice: Paintovers are always appreciated. I'll definately try some of your suggestions and define the leg anatomy a bit more.

Kamsvag: Thanks! I agree about the nose and cloth. I'll try experimenting with the arm a bit.

kBg_Fiske: Thanks...I'll work on that!

I'll try to post an update as soon as I can. Unfortunately, my computer was hit by a virus/worm and I need to get that fixed before I can work on the painting anymore. In the meantime, I'd appreciate any further c&c you guys have to offer. Feel free to rip into it!

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