11 Second Club

[Zookoo]

Right now its abit hard to crit because its at such an early stage and the poses are all too similar. But personally I would think it'll look clearer if she...or he (lol), begins with the pointing pose while having the hand shake slightly. Then once she says "Ever!" change the pose to a straight stance. All arms straight down, and body slightly leaning forward to make her look pissed :P

[assafk]

Hey, good idea, I'll do that.
Thanks.

[assafk]

Some progress. Still blocking, but nearly done. Just have to finish the lips syncing and fix all the bad poses.
What do you think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfnvFkJv_rc

[assafk]

Opps... Double post...

[LocoAndy]

What's up dude,

I like that you brought the character in closer. Smart move, because in your first post, there was a lot of space not being used by the character. I think you made another good choice by removing the hand from covering the face so much (as it was in your initial post).

On the other hand, the character seems a bit jumpy. I'm seeing some isolated movement. Are you making "Select all" or "Key All" buttons? They really made a difference for me when I had a lot of issues with isolated movement.

It's getting there. Most of your poses are there, although I think the last 3 seconds could be a bit more interesting and clearer. Also, finalize your horizon line. I think it will help with the overall presentation of your animation :)

Think: Arcs

-Andrew

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