character:evil in blue

[tomG]

update with color correction.....



http://mypage.bluewin.ch/opacity/art/drawing/blue_evil2.jpg

[tomG]

hey come on guys ..... are you to tired to hack on your keyboard?? ist the pic so shitty? don't staring just on the image ....... write what you think!

thanx

[wildsheepchase]

I think you've got a good start. In general, I think you could work on the blurriness throughout the whole image- you can do that by avoiding the smudge tool and don't over use the airbrush. His neck/chest could use some definition. At the moment, you can't really tell what's happening anatomy wise in that area. The face looks pretty good, but I think you've overdone it on the creases/wrinkles, especially in the cheek area. The last thing is that I can't tell what exactly the form is right above his shoulder(clouds?). If they're supposed to be clouds, I would maybe start that area over and make them more wispy....it almost looks like he's wearing a wool sweater.

Hope that helps :beer:

[tomG]

thanks wildsheepchase! i'll try to fix all the things you said ...... if i find some time this week. i know what you mean with blurriness ... but i still have some problems while working on PS. i.e. how can i blur a small area (with the pen) with a extreme blur factor .... i have to learn learn learn learn .......

[tomG]

ohhhh.... much better with jus a bitt of blurrrrrr. this will be the last "pre post" version .... the next one will be the finished version with another background

http://mypage.bluewin.ch/opacity/art/drawing/blue_evil_Blurr.jpg

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