night hunter - vampire

[TES]

everithing needs much more details...

[3zTAN]

No je to spica, ale tie zuby by som mu spravil vecsie:applause:

[mstl]

No ja to rikam porad....zuby delaj cloveka...ehm..vampira :twisted:

[TES]

tnx guys:)

[TES]

hey all:beer: i´m back and i like to show you my small update... i got some time to work on my vampire so i worked last hour on his clothes.... it´s still a bit mirrored but i´m working on it...

enjoy ...tes
http://www.tes.euweb.cz/wip_kabat.jpg

[TES]

he will have some spikes on his shoulders ...

[REZI-st]

(only czech) no už to zaèina vypadat.... jen tak dal :) ale chtìl sem se zeptat me pripada že ma jinou hlavu nez si ukazoval predtim stema bilýma vlasama ... jinak plašt vypada bezvadne :applause:

[TES]

rezi-st ...tnx man... about that head..i just worked a bit more on his head texture..

[TES]

hey all guys!no posts?sh*t!:( i like to ask you about something... i like to do some "bone" wings to my vampire and i like to hear your opinion pls...today i will work on jeans

[sforsyth]

Well, I don't know, he doesn't look very scary... or vampirish. His head and torso seem very low in detail compared to his new clothes aswell (which are coming along nicely by the way). Are you still working on those too?

[TES]

tnx for reply.....these first renders are the begining of my model...i know that looks a bit low poly ,but i´m working on it...:beer:

[TES]

hey all....i need help from you.....tell me pls what i must do to do him more scaryer.... i don´t like to do him like some monster.. i like to do him as a normal man ,but with a bit longer fangs.. just like vampires in Underworld trailer...

[TES]

worked more on face texture....here is a guick tests

http://www.tes.euweb.cz/face.jpg
http://www.tes.euweb.cz/face2.jpg

[Lordrych]

Awesome job, I love the detail in the Trench very well done, I have a question though is that holes in his shoulders of the coat? The detail on the face map is awesome, only I think you loose some detail in the ear part :( Also the cracks seem to look like they have dirt in them, you might want to lighten up your color in the cracks maybe try to change is to a different tone if you look the tones in humans change in the shadow they dont' actually seem to be brown depending on the color of the skin. you might want to change the shadows of your skin map to a blueish tone it will give him more of a dead feel.


Rych

[TES]

lordrych - tnx for your reply...am happy that you like it...about that holes in the shoulder part of the coat-its holes:)and about that ears part-i like to give to it more details,but ears are my nightmare :(

I need every crit-i´m doing it to our czech graphic challenge

[TES]

small update.. http://www.tes.euweb.cz/clothes.jpg

[Kralle]

it takes forever for the images to load, dunno, if they are but try posting htem in JPG, heh dunno. maybe its just your server or my internet, i cant get none of the images to load.:shrug:

[REZI-st]

very nice textures :buttrock: head is perfect :thumbsup:

[TES]

tnx guys!
kralle- sometimes this happend,that you cant see images...my server is ok...all images have only about 15-20kb...

rezist-tnx man:))

[TES]

hey guys....i haven´t so much time to work on this piece...have to much work in a job..but i´m trying to get back to this woek and continue on it

[Lukashi]

Hey tes, good progress, the cloth looks nice, but it looks like it is some form of thick leather, so it looks odd to me the way it is floating up that high, i would suggest either moving more of the cloth or making the whole thing move less.

:wavey:

[TES]

hey all..
lukashi-tnx.....i don´t know from what material it will be done....

BTW-i liked to continue this weekend on it,but my motherboard burned:(

[mstl]

Chudacku malinky....to nasere,co? Deska v dymu a nuda doma.
:surprised

[TES]

hey all....my computer is ok so i found a bit of time to work a bit on my character...
http://tes.euweb.cz/face_new.jpg

[REZI-st]

nice work :beer: keep going and good luck :buttrock:

[borchert]

I very much like the vampire !! but it seems like the ears need some detailing or something the black thing, tatoo, at his eye have abit too much of a mappish-look to it.

[ComatoseWolf]

good job, it's coming along nicely.:beer:

Don't much care for the tatoo on his face though, a little too blurry.

The lips and the teeth look great, the clothes looks really good to, cept for where you can see the seams.

[WanielJorge]

Nice job, only see that all good vampire has to have redder eyes and a more diabolical charm...:beer: :wip:

[Yeenke]

Fakt cool

[TES]

hey all!!!!thx guys for your replys!!! i continued on this character when i was ill...so here are some updates..BTW-the clothes will not be used...

[mstl]

Super.......
You is makac :))

[REZI-st]

jojo ses makaè ;)

[Drakaran]

Hmm, didn't know vamps grew brambles....

A few notes on the model:
The articulation of the rib cape is good, but the bottom flange where the rib cage spreads out and raps around the side it too narrow. They've been pinched in. Make the shoulders broader and the "wing" muscles should be showing some with arms extended like that. Basically the rib cage is also too narrow at the top and there is a wedge of muscle and bone from the shoulder blade and lats as they are rotated when the arms are raised (hope ya understood all that). Legs seem a little thin.

Good articulation what's that diagonal artifact going across the chest about? Is that a modeling error or you building that into some scuplting feature?

Pretty good modeling other than those things. Keep it up!

[TES]

diky chlapy:))

Drakaran - tnx for your post....i know that there are many anatomical problems,but i don´t like to do a perfect body,how everybody likes...i like to do a vampire not bruce willis....if you saw Blade2 you know what i mean-there were many anomalies..

[TES]

BTW....the last posted render is old.....i remaked whole arms...when i will have some good render i will post

[TES]

started texturing the body...so here is some test render....the body texturing isn´t finished yet...
http://www.tes.euweb.cz/00.jpg

[TES]

no replys?:((

[Amir]

His outfit and tatooes look great. The skin color you chose for him is spot on and I like the bone blades protruding from his forearms - gives him unique "edge" in a usually underdesignd character (everybody knows the conventions for a vampire design and yours diverged from it) maybe some more bone blades would add to the overall look (like from the elbows maybe). Good job
I think his abs should be a bit wider and he has as sad expression on his face, his eyebrows should be more like -> \ / (like he is angry, but more subtle)and the far corners of his eyes should be higher (to match the angle of the eyebrowse)

[REZI-st]

verry nice work :) "jen ty ruce se mi zdaj nejak divny nechces pridat vic pohledu? ten palec mi nejak nesedi "

[TES]

tnx guys ! i bought Darkness comix book for inspiration...so i will work more on it....i think:)i thought about the bone blades comming from his shoulders....everything may be....sory for my english:))

[Ozzman]

Yeah nice vamp dude.
REZI-st is right about that finger.
CZ: Je to dobrý, ale pøipadá mi, že na to jak má prokreslený svaly na hrudníku jsou ruce hodnì "ubohý" -zkus lépe vykreslit deltový sval a bicák. No ty prsty taky... Ale jinak je to moooc gooooood.

[TES]

some pose render...
http://www.tes.euweb.cz/01.jpg

[Ozzman]

Nice work.
Ale zda se mi, ze ten loket je trochu moc ostry

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