Character 3D: My Head (UGLY)

[summeralive]

need to take care of the eye!the reflection make it looks fate....
the nose is too clean..... a bit darker will be better!ofcause wf more texture!!!!
eye brow..... eeee.... some prob...??? take care!!

but but but..... is very nice.....overall looks ok...!!!!!keep it up!



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[robcamp]

Thanks for the constuctive comment summeralive!
I forgot to mention.. this is my FIRST ever 3D head :)

[sixthe45]

Modelling is good.
In 2nd picture eyes look too watery.
Hair is too thick.(density fine)
Skin too plastic,especially the ears.

[cgtalkfish]

Hi, it looks pretty good. I agree with sixthe45 about the eyes being too glossy. Overall a very nice render. Can you give any tips on setting up UV's for your head? What map projections do you use etc...

[mora]

since this is your first model AAAARGH!!!! very good mesh!!

but in your next model,try a better material and lighting and render:cool:

[robcamp]

Here is a new render with some Photoshop touch up for focus, levels and color balance and an additional highlight in the eyes. I also quickly painted the clothe around the neck....

http://www.robertocampus.com/images/g3d_me-sunny.jpg

Hope you guys like this one better.

[Thekkur]

very cool! can you post a pic of yourself as a reference?

[Cynical_Saint]

The skin looks much better with the lighting in the last pic.

One thing I do notice is that the forehead to eyebrow transition is too smooth. In the last pic you see the forehead curves down very smoothly to the eyebrow. However the eye socket should create a slight bump just above the eyebrow. Texture still needs a bit of work in how it reacts to light, but other than that the model looks very good and well proportioned.

Good Job.

[robcamp]

cgtalkfish: I used planar projections for the main sections of the head (front, sides, top, back) then used UnwarpUV and Texported the final Uv map. Here it is:

http://www.robertocampus.com/images/3dme_unwrapped.gif


Thekkur: Here is my REAL face:

http://www.robertocampus.com/roberto_real.jpg
Mhhh.. I should try render one like the photo above...

Cynical_Saint: Thanks, I will try to improve the skin specularity map. I tend to over emphasize it...

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