2D Char: From the Darkness

[summeralive]

take care of the colour and the propotion .....
design is ok....keep it up!!




try more!:shrug: :shrug: :shrug:

[MakoHaze]

Well, it was to be in anime-ish stylings, and sort of a near-cel shading colour style, so that's why his colours seem somewhat flat and also why his proportions are stretched. I wasn't really going for realism... he's a villain, so I figured I'd make him somewhat lanky (plus he was in a coffin for a millenia, so muscular distrophy would kick in as well :D)

Anything else?

[quazee]

you have a nice style

[bgermain]

Looks good overall. The neck is a bit simple, there should be better defined musculature (not necessarily bigger, just better defined) and the mouth looks a little...well...Beavis & Butthead. If he's grinning that much I would expect to see some gums. Everything else is great, including that cool red umbrella he's holding; looks like real satin.

[bgermain]

Oh, my bad. It's a bloody sword.

[wazza m]

I like it allot.

Why not try to push yourself pose wise. Now that you've got the design down - lets see a dramatic action shot or something that get's us inside the character's head. Use some cool perspective - it's the composition of the shot that needs work.

Otherwise, well done

Wazza

[Alevice]

A few notes/observations:

-Left forearm is larger than right.
-Judging by the guy's complextion, the head should be a bit more...ummm...thinner?
-You need to define more thr lightin and texture on the red shirt. --The current shad is way too soft and does not give me any feel of volume.
-A personal opinion: They hair covering his eyes does not look that cool, and in reality, its so annopying to have your view blicked by hair.
-Restating a pervious comment, the big sword looks more like a satin umbrella. It does look good as an umbrella, but its clearly not what you were you aiming at.

The rest is very good imo. :)

[Hellmare]

awesome superb and lot more!!! hey man - you're good in 2d! will you accept to send me some more ? also will you agree to use it in some galleries ? looks in manga style for me ;)

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