Indian warrior

[oXYnary]

I agree with the warrior not looking Indian enough. And I do like the character, but I would say, could you put a bone on his feather necklace? That would really add an extra "omph' to it .

Oh, and the eyes seem a little big.

[chrisdejoya]

hey steve nelson, nice character but the texture doesn't seem to be as nice as the one on the cowboy your friend showed us. are you still working on it?

[Steve Nelson]

yeah the textures still need some work. This is my first game model. I have alot left to learn. I will be posting the character with new texture maps pretty soon. Please check it out then and see what you think. I was probably a little to fast in posting it.

Thx for the crits, keep'em comin,

steve

[oXYnary]

"I was probably a little to fast in posting it. "

I disagree, its best to get the feedback while you still can versus after its already completed. I think not enough posters or >responders<* here take this into account.

* Yes you who only reply after the work is done when it's too late. I see how much this thread has been accessed.. I know your out there! ;)

[Steve Nelson]

Just added a new pic and an animation at the top.

thanks for the feedback so far, keep it coming.
Steve Nelson

[DrakeX]

he looks french!

good model nonetheless tho.

[Dhin]

Maybe if you addad a scalp or two to his belt, also darken the skin tone just a little. He looks more like an early Hollywood Indain than a real Native American (watch old westerns, the "indians" in them are less Native American than I am.)

[oXYnary]

Looks alot better, the hanging feather really helps.. THough I wish you would posted in your follow up, as it confuses solved issues when people read the thread.

[Mangled Poly]

awesome char it has a very stylish feel to it

[Steve Nelson]

I would like to get some critiques on the animation of it as well. The link is at the top. Thx for the help.

Steve

[oXYnary]

Walking in that manner with his hand on the knife handle seems unnatural. Also give the bow some more weight with a little bit of increased secondary action.

[Mangled Poly]

hmm the run needs some work in my opinion the top half looks like a sneek and the bottom looks liek a run which i know your going for but theres something missing.. maybe more of a torso and uper body sway....

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