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KV99
08-08-2003, 05:03 PM
"Essence of Laephine"

http://www.hot.ee/fd2003/wallpaper30pre.jpg
1024x768 Wallpaper resolutsioon
http://www.hot.ee/fd2003/wallpaper30.jpg
"Essence of Laephine I"

http://www.hot.ee/fd2003/wallpaper32pre.jpg
1024x768 Wallpaper resolutsioon
http://www.hot.ee/fd2003/wallpaper32.jpg
"Essence of Laephine II"

Enjoy!

Oh, and comments and critique is definetly welcome!


These pictures are involved with a certain storyline, which may be interesting to read if you like the pictures. It is a short story and doesnt take much of your time, thanks.

http://www.hot.ee/fd2003/laephine/laephine
KV99
08-08-2003, 06:41 PM
Views, no replies. I personally like the image, as the author of it, but no replies makes me feel kinda strange. Ah well, there are better images for you to reply out there then ;) Thanks!
elfling bard
08-08-2003, 06:51 PM
Hi...First of all this is a good pose and composition. I like the leaves at the back, it got a good blend of tones.
On the other side the hair is too straight and thin, the nose and the face can have a more details. But it's ok. Cannot read your story...other language that saying me to register to something before!!!
Good work stills...I think that you are on the right path...
KV99
08-08-2003, 06:56 PM
So sorry, it was html file and not htm file. Here is the correct link:

http://www.hot.ee/fd2003/laephine/laephine

Sorry for inconveniances, I hope youll enjoy the short story!
elfling bard
08-08-2003, 07:24 PM
It's a good short story you got there. One thing that i like is the shifting character point of view you put in it. First... Endohrs, then Gareth...It's like if Gareth is Endohrs in a way. You got good skills that is worth developing. Check the way you put your character description...can be better. :thumbsup:
KV99
08-08-2003, 07:33 PM
Thank you! In descriptions, yes Im not Tolkien. I am more of a action-writer with shifting character development, and alot of times through dialog.

Thanks!
Draco-84
08-08-2003, 08:56 PM
I love the contrast between the two images! The decayed image on the bottom is far superior (IMHO). I think that the tear/rain drop on both images need more depth though. They seem a little flat.
Overall great work! I saved them both! :thumbsup: :applause:
KV99
08-08-2003, 09:00 PM
Thank you! As I said in the chess thread, I love that you saved those pictures. Makes me feel good and warm, and its all I need for motivation ;)
Draco-84
08-08-2003, 09:05 PM
Your pictures have inspired me as well! If we can't rely on eachother then what good is this place right?
Glad to have helped! :thumbsup:
KV99
08-08-2003, 09:37 PM
Originally posted by Draco 84
Your pictures have inspired me as well! If we can't rely on eachother then what good is this place right?

For sure!
Arab Queen
08-08-2003, 11:18 PM
WOoOoOoOoOoOow!
that's cool!:eek:
good job:applause:
KV99
08-09-2003, 12:22 AM
Thanks!
KV99
08-09-2003, 11:35 PM
Has anyone else read the story and/or has comments about it, and the pictures?
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