Alien 3D WIP

[ozmodiar]

Looks nice! But why did you post it? :curious:

Doe you want critique?

[Steel GER]

Ohhh...critique...hmmm good idea :applause: .

c&c are welcome :wavey: .

But its WIP..so do please do not :wip: to much

[ozmodiar]

Hehe :)
I’m not too familiar with Alien movies, but a have play AVP on computer...so it looks, as I said nice. However, shouldn’t the tale be a bit longer? And the feet looks little strange (?).

In this type of scenes it’s decisive whit a good texture, (as you know!) so I looking forward to that moment! :)

[Steel GER]

Little Update...Some changes in connection between legs and the main body...fingers bend.. etc.

Looks better ??

C&C are really welcome :beer:



Steel
http://www.3d-reality.de/Alien_screen_3.jpg

[mars2003]

wooooooow!looks great

[dubge]

The hands and feet could probly be a bit more fierce. they don't come across as scary. more the feet than hands but other than that looks good!:)

[Steel GER]

Little Update

thx for the comments !!!

http://www.3d-reality.de/Alien_art.jpg

Steel :wavey:

[Steel GER]

Another render of my Alien.
Did some mistakes...to much light of the hdri for the texture.

But maybe i will get some C&C ??




thx !

http://www.3d-reality.de/Alien_hdri.jpg Steel :wavey:

[Meephunter]

It has the working to be a great model, but there are something That dont seem right about it, first like it is said before you need to increase the size of the tail. Also the hands dont look right, Too human looking. Something needs to be done with the neck. I dont belive that the aliens feet looked quite like what you have them as. I would suggest that you take a look at the movie aliens. pay close attention to the way that they look, the reflectiveness and color of the Alien's skin. (Aliens 4 has a great shot of an alien that is lighted well.) Aslo I would suggest that you go online and look up the models of the alien. Last you have to have the little mouth in the alien. that is what makes up the alien!

[Steel GER]

Tadaahhhh.....
now it looks like this one

http://3d-reality.de/alien_3.jpg

What do u think ????

Steel
:beer:

[CPUxtc1]

I don't mean to be soooo mean but the alien looks a bit... gay.
The hands look like gay clown hands, there are parts that look a bit to basic and thrown together.... like the neck, he doesn't seem to have one, maybe if you taper the part that attaches to his head it will look like a neck, the arms are way too skinny. Everything is out of proportion, like the legs and arms and neck.
I like the head alot, you should make the teeth smaller and closer together and more of them, and make the tail longer by 1/3... Alot of it looks like you just got lazy.

Like I said, I'm not trying to be mean so I hope you weren't offended.

Try taking a reference picture into your background to help you out, I swear it works.

[Daz]

heh, the pose does look like the alien is queer, i dont really feel it has much resemblance to gigers aliens so i hope i dont offent you there, its just a tad hmmm it doesn't look right, aliens dont have normal human hands, it looks to odd if you ask me, just doesn't "fit together"

[peachstapler]

Your alien looks like he's wearing a vest in the last picture and is on his way to the disco.

The legs, especially the upper ones, leave something to be desired. Aber, das ist die Beste Alien ich hab' gesehen bei dieses site. Sehr gut und macht mehr Bilder hier wenn moeglich!

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