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J.Mac
09-09-2009, 02:20 AM
This is a hanger inspired by one of my favorite movies The Last Star Fighter.

So I am a little stuck on this as far as what needs to be pushed and such. I am definitely having trouble in certain areas.



Top right
Bottom right. I cant get this to feel right no matter what I do. There is a solution I am just not seeing it right now.
The middle where the doors open. To me I see a ship being transported into another compartment.
Any constructive criticism, comments or any thoughts that could help are greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance.

-Jesse

http://www.jessemaccabe.com/images/wip/jessemaccabe%20-%20the%20last%20starfighter%20-%20hanger%20wip.jpg
lightcache
09-09-2009, 12:53 PM
wow. it's pretty impressive!


very nice use of colour and lighting is good. composition is good. i'm not sure whats happening bottom left, is it a vehicle being repaired or something?

maybe some highlights on the railings from the strip lights will help the right side sit in the frame better?

anyway, its looking pretty great sofar.
do-re-my
09-09-2009, 05:49 PM
To answer your question on input for the right side.
The railing going up the stairs and round the plateau are 'old' I personally would find a 'new' way for this ship like balustrade.
Maybe no railing at all? because it seems a bit stale, and ordinary. That's what I get from it.

As for the right top side?
Perhaps a window? Nah dunno the former is my 2 cents.
J.Mac
09-09-2009, 09:08 PM
lightcache - Thank you and I will try that out.

do-re-my - Thanks now I have some food for thought now. Time try and get this done
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