View Full Version : Pirate King - Teaser
zoo-prod 09-08-2009, 12:53 PM Hi guys !
I've just put together few shots of my next short movie : Pirate King.
I hope you'll like it !
Your comments and critics are very very welcome !
The teaser is right there : http://plateau.boris.free.fr/teaser.htm
Enjoy !
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lipuster
09-09-2009, 08:08 AM
looks good.waiting for the film.keep it up.
zoo-prod
09-09-2009, 01:09 PM
Thank you "lipuster".
The animation is 90% done, but I've got heaps shots to render left. And I won't have much time to spend on it in the few next month. It's always hard to do a movie alone when you work !
Anyway, I hope I could finish it for the end of the year.
zoo-prod
09-11-2009, 07:23 AM
Well...
I was expecting a bit more reactions on that one !
352 viewers and only one reply ! What's wrong with it ?
Would be fantastic to have comments and critics.
Come on guys ! Please be sure to check it out !
It's only been up on the forums for 2 days... what were you expecting?
If I were you, I'd try and steer it away from the Pirates of the Carribean theme...
1. Get rid of the music.
2. Put more detail into the textures/models. Think about your lighting, everything looks a bit flat at the moment.
3. As for the animation, I'm no animator, but some of it seemed a bit stiff and didn't feel very smooth. i.e. the clash of swords when the pirates fight. There's no timeline so can't be more specific with regards which shot I am refering to.
its good to get some clips together for feedback - get rid of the whole trailer thing.
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