Photoshop picture want some pointers

[moiremusic]

So, can we see the picture or get a link? ;)

[Midgardsormr]

Kern the title "My Promise." You want the space between the letters to be fairly even. With a script font, you might even touch it up to look like real cursive, with the letters connected to one another. To kern text in most Adobe apps, place the text cursor in the space you want to adjust and alt-right or left arrow.

Another type problem is the lack of margins. Whitespace is good; put a little distance between the copy and the left edge of the image. Also, put a bit around that vertical separator.

"and adore" is lonely on a line by itself, and it sticks out. A line break to put "I love and adore" together would make it look nicer.

There's a gray thing at the bottom of the image that you could easily get rid of. I'm not sure what it is—part of her jacket, maybe? Also, there's something glinting in the space beneath your chin. There's no other detail in there to suggest what it is, so I'd just clone it out.

Finally, you have a minor grammatical error: "I will cherish all that you are, and all that I am is yours." You missed the comma between the two clauses.

Oh, and try not to look so sinister in the wedding photos. Congratulations!

[roderickweise]

Thank you I will get right on changing it.

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