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jonbez
09-03-2009, 04:29 PM
Heres my second animated short that I made to enter into phase 4 of the $1,000,000 Make something unreal Contest

Hope u like it

The Plan: HD link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hIDP-CubJF8

for anyone thats not seen the 1st part called (TheBox)
check here
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=154&t=790744

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/4103/theplan2.jpg

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/3735/theplan4.jpg

googboog8
09-04-2009, 05:27 AM
that was hilarious, i don't know why but i found it really funny... it was just so silly heheh... it's nice to see something funny that doesn't have a message or try to touch you at an "emotional" level

i think you might have something going, once you smoothen out your animation and add a little more movement to the characters so they aren't so stiff...

jonbez
09-12-2009, 07:57 PM
Thanks googboog Im glad u liked it m8.
its good to get feedback from someone.

Your spot on about the animation needing more attention . But due too only having 1 and a half months for the whole project I allocated 2 weeks for animation which unfortunatly didnt leave much room to fine tune before the deadline of the competition. I guess we learn by are mistakes and my major one was starting a project to late but it was a good learning curve and a mistake I know not to make twice.;)

detached
09-12-2009, 10:23 PM
I also found this very funny. Good work especially for the short amount time in which it was produced.

jonbez
10-01-2009, 01:47 AM
thanks m8

any comments appreciated but keep in mind its made using a computer games engine not rendered with a 3d program.

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