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bartlomiejk
08-28-2009, 05:48 PM
http://inte1ect.com/BeatBot_final_small.mov
or
http://vimeo.com/6316393

BeatBot is my first 3d animated short. It was done for Bachelor of Science Project in PJWSTK. The film was created using Autodesk Maya 2008 and After Effects. Music and Sound Effects made by Michal Jurek.

Hope you will like it.
cheers
Bartek Kalinowski

Hordak
08-28-2009, 10:53 PM
Well I liked it untill the rabbit appeared, didn't really like his design. Not sure what you are trying to say with this story...

The end reminded me of a Fanta commercial, so did the look.

That sounded awfully negative, but really it isn't!

Good work keep it up! :thumbsup:

bartlomiejk
09-01-2009, 10:42 AM
Story was a big problem because my school is a technical academy and it was hard to persuade any innovation to story. From begining I knew that story will be the worst part of my work. This was very big demotivation to me because I think that good story is 50% of well executed film. That is why I decided to achieve at least acceptable look, design and quite good animation. I found very usefull advises from henningko, he gave me big motivation to make this film happend:

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=2&t=384041

I even tried to insert fart joke to story ;), but my promoter was inflexible.
Any way this project gave me oportunity to learn realy a lot. From preproduction to more technical aspects. First and most important thing in production 3d short is planning, more work you done in early stages of production the less unusefull job you will have in the late stages of production.
Thanks for crit and I hope my next film will be much better
Salute!

bartlomiejk
09-20-2009, 11:43 AM
anymore crit?

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