Character:Linda

[Giacomo_M]

>i still feel like the feet have a problem,and i cant figure out what

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Her ankles are extremely thick!

I've always found it easier to model human figures with arms at 90 degrees from the torso and legs perfectly vertical. Somehow it helps me to get the proportions right.

GM

[cybernaut]

Nicely done!!! :applause:

From what I can see her proportions all seem to be realistically accurate, maybe not supermodel-esk curves but realistic none the less.

One thing that bugs me is her shoulders. It could just be the way you have her set up but it almost looks like her shoulders are connected at the wrong place...too high maybe?. The steep slope of her clavicle might be throughing things off abit as well. On alot of people the clavicle can go almost completely horizontal with no change in it's angle until the arm rises past 30 degrees.


Its hard to crit her feet properly when their so small. It would be much easier to assess the problem you speak of if you posted a few closer shots. From what I see with the image you've got, her feet look like they are tilting up in the front allowing us to see her heals giving a rather unusual appearence. However, if this is an Orthographic shot then the lack of prespective might be making things look more off than they really are. JAT

I can understand the tricky task of making feet look right. I have tried and tried and tried and still something always looks a bit off. Making 3D feet and hands are the trickiest parts of the body to model IMHO.

Love to see them wires?:D

[AshodT]

Her ankles are extremely thick!

i agree,will fix that :scream:

as for the 90 degree armes thing,i have my theory about it.:p


it's orthographic shot.
i will post some close ups of the feet and boobs (my favourite part) and wires as soon as i get home.

thanks for the crits,i'm sure it'll help for tonights tweaks!

:beer:

[AshodT]

ok here are the close ups!

[AshodT]

it kinda looks wrong:surprised

[zzacmann]

Did you use male or female references for the feet? I think they look a little odd because the toes look more masculine and rest of the feet look more feminine. Most women's toes I've seen look pretty stubby and "cute" when compared to mens. The toes you have modeled are too long and boney compared with the rest of the foot I think.

[davidSingha]

Nice model!

The toes could use some touch up especially where the toe nails meet the flesh. The proportion of the toes are also incorrect and should be scale down.

hope this helps.
cheers:beer:

[AshodT]

yeah,i used my own toes as reference.:drool:


i guess you're right about the proportions of the toes,will check em out.

heres a big render i did,i minly changed the face area alot,and some at the shoulder.

warning,150 kb image!!:D

BIG IMAGE (http://perso.wanadoo.fr/ashod/Linda%20by%20ashod.jpg)

[cybernaut]

Looking better, but the shoulder clavicle thing is still bothering me. Maybe do a quick web seach for specific shots of that part of the body roughly in that pose. Fitness sites are a good source for reference.

As for the toes, well, I agree with what has been said, too manly!.

I did a quick web search myself and found this shot to get you started. Hope it
helps.

http://www.countryfair.com/boothimages/booth34/sblues.JPG

Great Work!!!

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