Please need feedback!

[bigB]

I really like the model, but the texture of the castle really needs some work in my opinion. I can't see bricks but I see a colored grain. if you fix the texture you have a very good castle.....

[starqueen]

that is cool... i agree, a change of texture would make it picture perfect :beer:

[sethmisek]

what they said. Lose some of the grain and layer in some kind of brick texture. The weathering looks good, so does the lighting

[McSpirit]

You should read the rules before posting... any way :P the birds seems out of scale :shrug:

[wazza m]

I think its a brilliant effort.

My main critique would be the use of depth of field. The castle looks like a small hobby model. Depth of field looks best with closeups and medium shots. If your gonna use it - just have it affecting the closest objects (leaves) for a scene so large.

Choice Bro!!!:p

[YounesOUHBI]

Ah! i've just read the rules :blush:
I'll correct it next time i post something...

[Standard Poodle]

I'm pretty dumb, but I think it would look a whole lot better with a distant flock of birds rather than them flying around like that.

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