Environment: penthouse interior/exterior

[agreenster]

Very nice. I especially like the inside render. Its just a bit shy of photoreal, but still nice.

[Kinetix]

WOW! that looks very realistic. You guys made it very detailed! Nice work. I love the lighting

[Aros]

Originally posted by Sebastian
Credit: Jeroen Beuk, Niels Sinke (aka:Nelis) and Sander Mastbergen and me off course.

Wie ben jij, je achternaam bedoel ik :)


Geweldig werk! Alleen vind ik het tafeltje + stoelen helemaal links niet mooi, het mist de bevel? :)

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Great work! Only I think the table + chairs on the left aren't good, it's missing the bevel? :)

[Digital Soap]

could you post a wire frame please?

[Sebastian]

Wie ben jij, je achternaam bedoel ik
Ik ben Sebastiaan van Halm (aka: Sebastian)


Great work! Only I think the table + chairs on the left aren't good, it's missing the bevel?
Not everything is build with great detail, because of the time limit we have for the projects. If I only had given more time, I would have done it.

could you post a wire frame please?
I'll put it up tomorrow. I don't have the scene at home, so I'll have to make it at work.


Thanks for the comments so far!!

[Tony Richardson]

Very nice work! The lighting is right on.

Did you model the furniture as well?

My only critic would be the white carpet, it looks pasted in, no shadows along the edge and it looks like a noise map with no real texture to it.

What kind of timeframe did you have on this project?

Again, very nice images!

[Sebastian]

Originally posted by Tony Richardson
Very nice work! The lighting is right on.

Did you model the furniture as well?

My only critic would be the white carpet, it looks pasted in, no shadows along the edge and it looks like a noise map with no real texture to it.

What kind of timeframe did you have on this project?

Again, very nice images!

Thanks!!

We did use some furniture from previous projects, but everything is made by us.

I agree with you on the carpet...and I can tell you why it looks a bit crap and pasted in. The material has some self illumunation to it...we assigned that in a previous project because it was to dark... so the detail in the texture is a bit lost.. But I forgot to change it in this scene...

Our timeframe was like a week (3 people working on the project, but not all full-time, except me)

[SkyNet]

Very nice ! I really like the lighting
nice work indeed
:thumbsup:

[Nelis]

just wanting to get emails when someone replies, and this is the way to do it.....

doesn't anybody have crits.......

greets Niels (AKA. Nelis)

[herodg]

WOW,...the interior shot looks reaaally good...but i do think that the exterior looks a bit flat.
Anyway keep it up and post some more if you can.

[Joss]

yep, VRAY does this justice! great work!

I wish they made it for Maya.

does in render fur? how long for a render?

[Dave Black]

I'm trying to figure out where the light source is coming from that is lighting the table and chairs with the laptop on it. Kinda wierd looking. There's no light fixture where the light should be coming from ,and it apperas to be at the wrong angle from the outside light source. In fact, the shading on that table and chairs is the flatest part of the whole image. I'd tweak that a good bit as I think it's the image's biggest detractor.

Other than that, it's pretty good.

-3DZ

:D

[scotthik]

Sublime!

[PureFire]

I must agree with the table on the left looking very out of sorts with the overhead light no actually being there and the shadows a little too strong. Just fix that and it would be perfect.

As to the exterior shot I think the bricks really let it down. If you tweak them more it would look alot better. The front of the building with the balconies looks perfect to me.

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