Fullcolor girls

[IloveLadies88]

I like the third one so much. keep retouching it man and defining the hair and maybe a little background (i'm talking about the 3rd piece), I just feel the color is perfect!

great work!

[quidditas]

I like the first one best. It takes a certain confidence to leave some things "unfinished", like the crude outline of her lips and the smears of red and blue lighting her hair from behind. I think the scratchy brushstrokes and violent colours work better for you than the smoother blending of the fourth piece.
My only suggestion would be that you try and keep your style consistent within a single piece. It kinda looks like you can't decided whether to go blocky & graphic or abstract and suggestive. Use either bold strokes or smoke swirls, but not both in a single painting; they don't work as well together as either technique does alone. Keep experimenting with different combinations, though; I'm sure you'll find a mix that works.

It's great work. You have a really interesting style.

[d4f]

[QUOTE=quidditas
My only suggestion would be that you try and keep your style consistent within a single piece. It kinda looks like you can't decided whether to go blocky & graphic or abstract and suggestive. Use either bold strokes or smoke swirls, but not both in a single painting; they don't work as well together as either technique does alone.[/QUOTE]

You are probably right...I am going to try to follow your advice.Thank you very much for your answer.Here are two others picture:
The first one is for sale on a French art shop online and is digital oil
The second is digital pastel,acrylique,gouache and oil
The true size of quite my picture is 10000*10000pxhttp://fc02.deviantart.com/fs46/f/2009/235/c/7/closed_portfolio_by_ShinV.jpghttp://fc03.deviantart.com/fs49/f/2009/216/a/a/gramat_by_ShinV.jpg

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