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RobertoOrtiz 05-13-2002, 06:19 PM Hi guys,
this is a repost from another forum....
I am working on an 3d animated ad for a computer consulting company, that requires a nerdy animated T-Rex.
I have made two sketches for the piece, one cartoony
one more or less realistic.
I am attaching the sketches, and I would love to hear your input.
Thanks
-Roberto
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RobertoOrtiz
05-13-2002, 06:20 PM
Here is the first design
RobertoOrtiz
05-13-2002, 06:22 PM
Here is the other....
What do you guys think?
jeroentje
05-13-2002, 06:27 PM
Is nr 1 supposed to be nr 2's boss?
He looks like mine :)
Tell us where you're going with your ad, what's the concept?
What is the dinosaur going to do in the ad? Give us a context, it's hard to tell now.
The second looks most nerdy, but I gess you figured that one out yourself allready :hmm:
jeroentje
RobertoOrtiz
05-13-2002, 06:30 PM
Thanks for the quick response...
The Ad is for a consulting company called
MicroBytes.
Their motto is
"Our Nerds have more byte"
and the first ad is a Nerd Dino
attacking the MicroBytes logo.
jeroentje
05-13-2002, 06:38 PM
The first one is not a nerd. Nerds are not that agressive.
How about the second one with an enormous OVERbite? LOL
2nd's a lot better :thumbsup:
Be carefull not to make him look dumb. Clients hate that.
Why is he attacking the logo? Is the company THAT bad?
Don't want to be offensive, I just spend halve my live in advertising.
Good luck,
jeroentje
RobertoOrtiz
05-13-2002, 07:00 PM
Well I wanted to emphasize the fact that
"Our Nerds are better than their nerds"
Thus more aggressive.
The idea is that at the end he throws a letter
from the logo to the "camera " and then he
jumps on top of the "camera man".
jeroentje
05-13-2002, 07:16 PM
Originally posted by RobertoOrtiz
Well I wanted to emphasize the fact that
"Our Nerds are better than their nerds"
Thus more aggressive.
"Agression" does not equal "better"
So... at a higher nerdiness-level.
Howabout this:
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A simple zooming in on an extremely nerdie looking person, with a giant overbite. (maybe nerdie music like Abba in the background).
Text-over (=that english, mean like a voiceover in text) reads: "thank goodness he could never get a girl in highschool when there comes smoke out of your server".
or
"he's our biggest stud... your network will love him when it goes down".
Logo, payoff, etc.
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Or something like that.
jeroentje
jeroentje
05-13-2002, 07:19 PM
Sorry dude.
But that's what happens when you get a deus-ex-machina in your concept-thinking. :twisted:
****s up your mind doesn't it...
jeroentje
BTW There's an allmost identical one running as a print-campain here in Holland for XS4all. I know, all you dutch guys.
RobertoOrtiz
05-14-2002, 01:12 AM
Okay I'll try another idea..
How about this:
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Using the idea of an extremely nerdie looking t rex
reading a tech manual in a cubicle/server room.
"Our tech people are hungry monsters for knowledge... your network will love him when it goes down".
And the t-rex eats the book ater reading it.
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