animation: "she's not like... available"

[greyhat]

hmm.. I can´t make out what the blond man i saying in the last line.. is it: "hey what did i touch?" .. I don´t understand if it´s suppused to be funny... but my english isn´t that good...

why is the bandage on the blond mans right shoulder flashing?...

I like the fly on the "shocker" but i think you could add som smoke that fizzles when it gets electrified....

if you got some time left you could always work a little on the background...

nice work..

[jeandenis]

yep, the last line is "Now what I touch..."

My dmap on the shadows is low, and when you use the GI Joe script for lighting, then shadows can start to flicker. There is no storytelling purpose behind it :-)

I will add some smoke, that's a good idea, I was first concentrating on the animation. The shock device needs to be modeled too, as well as the BG.

Anything to fix animation wise?

Thanks for the feedback

Jean-Denis

[greyhat]

sorry for digging this up but isn´t the lines from Jurassic Park ?

[jeandenis]

Yep, Jurassic Park 1, Goldblum and Neil are the guys talking.

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