Character: Girl

[mushroomgod]

cool!

so far i mostly like it....i say mosty because theres somthing about the hair that im not sure about...i think it looks a little stuck on. Though of the top of my head i cant think of anyother way you could do it :rolleyes:

also, i think the reson you think she looks generic (which she doesnt btw) is becasue she looks like the sister of your balloon head character, which is ofcource a very good thing:thumbsup:

are you going to give her some kind of doll/rag doll? i think that could work very well :thumbsup:

other than that i think it looks great!



oh....because of her very reflective shoes (hdri?) se reminds me of Dorithy from Wizard of Oz:) ....Lions & Tigers & Bears Oh My!

[Darakusan]

Small girl from Monster Inc.?

[AJ]

Mushroomgod : My god - I do seem to have a thing for massive cheeks! Maybe she could carry the balloon head with her, hmm....

Yeh, I'm not 100% with the hair, but it was the easiest style I could think of with regards to being interesting, but not a pain in the arse. I'll have a play.

Rag doll you say... tempting, however she is going to have a pet so I don't know if that might be too much. Although now you've put the thought in my head it seems more and more appealing! :D

Darkusan : As soon as read that I thought "Oh sh;t, he's right...", her hair is very similar to Boo's, but hopefully (on checking, and a great excuse to watch the whole thing!) her head shape is different enough, but I can see exactly what you mean!

Small update, just some rough hands couple of tweaks - nothing spectacular;

http://www.moonjam.com/girl/Girl02_d.jpg

I have to say, I'm not looking forward to giving her eyes, I quite like her like this!

C&C's welcomed like pudding.

:D

[davidSingha]

Nice style. Looks like a doll.

cheers

[Tughan]

Hi there AJ. :)

This is really very cool work my friend. She is a so cute character. Especialy her hands and shoes. :)

But I think rounded eyes look much more cute on her. Like the first picture, maybe you should make them rounder a bit.

Anyway, do you plan to animate it? I think it would be very fun to animate her. :)

BTW, do you use 3dsmax or maya?

[Ingham]

She looks like very pretty, excellent work, I love the eyes (especially the eyeslashes !)

Only one thing maybe ... isn't the neck too long ?

[Darakusan]

AJ - haha, i dun really remember how Boo looks now..but once i saw your model and you mentioning it looking like some1.. immediatelly boo came into my mind haha.

And yeah i really think the neck is slightly too long.. make it shorter and more compact and i think she will look even cuter ! :scream:

And i can see she's happier in this model haha
Keep up the gd work!:thumbsup:

[CuTnPaste]

rheheheheh

very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

waiting for the eye!

:applause:

[Zanmato]

Very nice work there.

I too think the neck is tad too long.

Look forward to seeing more.

:thumbsup:

[Reezeex]

wow.very nice.
cute girl.............and the color was great too.
keep on working.....expect your works:applause: :applause: :applause:

[AJ]

Okay, I may have gone too far...

I've taken on people suggestions and shortened the neck and made her eyes rounder (and put a rough texture on them). Someone suggested to me to make her hair bunches a lot larger, so I've given that a shot... But I now fear that she's more like a cheap toy than a character,

http://www.moonjam.com/girl/Girl03_d.jpg

Could people please tell me what they think? Thanks!

[CuTnPaste]

eheh....good!!! :)

I think she needs something of special....some main features......I dunno....a special smile? a special hairstyle? ....

Anyway...good work!

:applause:

[nibo]

I really love this one!
Simple but very cool!
Way to go dude!

Maybe make the skin less plastic, and give here some freckels!
:beer:

[ShinChanPu]

Cute and lovely doll!:)

I like a lot the eyes... but I can see something strange in that fatty cheeks... I think it has to do with the shape, not size... not sure... well, anyway something is not working there.

[SideShow]

I liked it MUCH better without the hair and eyes tweak.

Really!

Greets

[fellah]

I made a little tweak of your girl in PS, to show some areas I wouls have tweaked a little. you can find a .gif of it here,
Tweak Pic (http://www.fellah.net/temp/Girl03_d.gif)

also, I agree that she looks a tad to much like a toy. but nothing that cannot be fixed.
here are a few suggestions,
ofcourse the textures will break the toyLook alot, some things to keep in mind(some very obvious)
- a tint of red to the cheeks.
- painted texture to the hair, can add alot.
- thicker eye lashes, to bring forward the eyes more.
- you could add the tearDuckt to, will add alot to the "real" look.

well, just some suggestion, might not be what you are looking for stylewise, up to you.

I hope you wont abandon this piece here. it's looking very good already, but she needs a little more work to reach the "perfect state".

cheers

[guereja_1]

she's so cute. i NO way does she resemble boo from Monster's Inc. I love the big pony tails. and her eyes are quite lovely.
i think the bag is too much.
maybe a teddy bear or something would be more kiddy like?
just a suggestion
a pet would be nice too.
keep it up!
does she have a name?

--lynet

[dcmoutinho]

very nice !!!

[erilaz]

You stopped! Why did you stop? :scream:

Will this one ever see the light again?

[LordEzzat]

I think she looks great ,that littl ebag gives her alot of personality as well looks like my little girl ...sweet....



LordEzzat

[dmonk]

this is a very cute character! :thumbsup:

I liked Fellah's Tweaked version.:D

[smaddl]

very sweet, cute and fun character :thumbsup:

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