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mexus
08-02-2003, 08:03 PM
Hi all,

Just searching for some critiques from professionals that can help me improve my animation skills


http://www.canarta.com/10sec



:rolleyes:

wedge
08-02-2003, 08:14 PM
your skills seem fine, but i don't really feel that the animation matches the sound clip.

Larsen
08-02-2003, 10:04 PM
Good animation of the body but yes, you should work on the lips sync, the mouth seems too closed, we don't feel that the character is nervous.

btw, 2 days ago, there was a guy on the forum who showed an animation with the same sound clip. Maybe you are from the same school ?

3DArtZ
08-02-2003, 11:10 PM
I agree, nice body motion but it doesn't seem like it is right for the clip. I'd try sitting him at a table, and eventually have him standing up with his hands on the table leaning closer to the target of his discussion.
Just a thought.

tenl
08-03-2003, 04:45 AM
Can;t seem to get it to work...

Can you post a direct link to the file...

TENL

kr3ml
08-03-2003, 05:30 AM
yea direct link would be great

mexus
08-03-2003, 10:21 AM
Sure..
www.canarta.com/10sec/10s_Erwin.mpg


Thanks for the crits.. I agree with slowing his body down a bit rather than have him move around as much as he is. The character is not very well constructed as per face expressions, so I am not able to do much. However, having great expressions etc.. I would do this animation a bit different as I imagined.

Any more critiques would be appreciated. And if there are any great models ready for animation with expressions in Maya I would love to have a crack at it.


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