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Zanmato
08-02-2003, 05:03 PM
Hi,

This is my first post and I just want to say that the work on these forums is top notch.:eek:
I've been using Max for just under a year in between other work and I thought I'll try and some feedback.
So this is what I'm working on at the moment. I'm not working to any concept. I got some ref images from fineart.sk and started modelling. Some work to do on the legs yet but hopefully it's going in the right direction. It's the first body I'm happy with so far anyway.

C&C plz.

http://www.rjrstudios.co.uk/imagesfull/bodytest4.jpg

http://www.rjrstudios.co.uk/imagesfull/bodytest3.jpg

:wavey:
Zanmato
08-03-2003, 12:11 PM
Close up of the face.

http://www.rjrstudios.co.uk/imagesfull/bodytest1.jpg

C&C plz.

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Completed work - Lego Super Car (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=79421)
SirLankyIII
08-04-2003, 10:25 AM
The body is good, but, theres something strange about the head.

It seems that the top of the head is a little too flat, or, the forehead is too high, but i can't be sure which.

The face is great though, keep up with the good work :D
mora
08-04-2003, 10:37 AM
criticaly deformed head
Zanmato
08-04-2003, 06:27 PM
Originally posted by SirLankyIII
The body is good, but, theres something strange about the head.

It seems that the top of the head is a little too flat, or, the forehead is too high, but i can't be sure which.

The face is great though, keep up with the good work :D

I think it's a bit of both. The top of the head is too flat, any in case you are right, doesn't look right yet . I'll tweak it and post a update. The ref I used had the face looking down a little so it may have thrown it off a little.

Thx for the crits. :)
WanielJorge
08-05-2003, 01:24 PM
:thumbsup: The modelling is good, the legs are fine stocking and it is without waist.:p
DanielB
08-05-2003, 04:08 PM
not bad, but her eyebrows seem deformed and too set in. The forehead also appear to be coming out. I would refereces to fix this. :)
davidSingha
08-05-2003, 05:23 PM
The face is in need of a plastic surgery... hee...hee...:)

For the most part the body is prety good only minor adjustment is required (arms, knee and feet).

Good work! Keep it up!

cheers:beer:
Zanmato
08-06-2003, 06:27 PM
Made some adjustments to the head. I think it's starting to look a little better now but it's still not quite there yet.

Wires

http://www.rjrstudios.co.uk/imagesfull/BodyTest7Wires.jpg

And the result smoothed

http://www.rjrstudios.co.uk/imagesfull/BodyTest5.jpg

Keep those C&Cs comin'!

I will post updates on the body later.

:beer:
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