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prashantxanimator
08-07-2009, 11:47 AM
Hi,
This is small blocking dialogue with rough lip sync

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CVccBlzjhw


plz add your comments ...

msteinert
08-07-2009, 05:15 PM
Hi!

Great piece of audio. The final part, near the laugh, it's really difficult to solve. Maybe the caracter could put his left elbow earlier in the sit, anticipating the next action or intention, and you could explore shoulder and head movements during the laugh. If possible, at a frame counter, it helps a lot during the comments.

Keep going.
Cheers.

prashantxanimator
08-11-2009, 07:00 AM
Thanks for suggestion

prashantxanimator
08-15-2009, 07:14 AM
Hi,
1 st pass animation


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jKsXWXhlZn0


Plz add ur critique



Prashant
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karan_vis
08-15-2009, 02:47 PM
hey prashant . Its looking good .
few things u can check here.

It looks like both the characters are not looking at each other. (eye directions).
May be u can exaggerate one characters performance, U can push the poses as well .

Overall its comming out good though. Keep animating:thumbsup:



Karan

prashantxanimator
08-15-2009, 04:23 PM
Thanks a lot karan

helloamaresh
08-15-2009, 05:59 PM
Hey Prashant.. looking good so far..

prashantxanimator
08-16-2009, 04:05 AM
Thanks amaresh. In short time, I'll update.

prashantxanimator
08-19-2009, 01:29 PM
Hi,
I did couple of changes, let me know what u think guys

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=43j9h1zeKYc






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