DK'Site

[Dkersys]

Thanks for your help :)

[InKraBid]

Letters are too tight together, it's a bit difficult to read. OTT it's looking good IMO.

[oblique]

Okay. I'll try.

What i see is nothing. Just a blank, grey sceen. No Concept of a website. No discription.
Give us some more. My eye is just scrolling down. 2Sec. for the Logo. 1sec. for the rest.

They is nothing to criticize. Just grey in grey for me.
I would only stop by, when there is good and interesting art. It is just a normal Frame for your "whatever".
And what means "DK".. Who is DK ? Who is us ?

If you are new in Webdesign. Think about content. You gave us just a grey frame.
Maybe your Art is grey too. or it is far too colorfull for a grey frame. Or the gallery ist just for your family fotos. I dont know.

My only advise can be: Ask for what you want to know. Don#t ask for critique.
I think it is a normal Composition for a Website. Nothing more. You need to work on. And show us how the content work with the frame.

I hope to see your next steps. And dont get me wrond i try to help. That is just what i see.
bye

[firstIssue]

It is looking very oldschool. Maybe you should refer to the people you want to reach and the moods you want to show in your design. If it is about you, and you´re into art, you should work more in this direction like color, shapes etc. I´m a webdesigner, you if you have got any questions, just ask.

[Dkersys]

Ok, I made it look a bit more interesting, but I have a problem with colours. What should I do with them?

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2805/design3e.jpg

[firstIssue]

As I said. If you want to reach people , who are in to art, you should make an eye catcher, for example a colored Logo or a Logo made of interesting shapes. Also you shouldn´t make a navigation with tabs that run into emptyness. There is no end of the tabs, so the user could loose his orientation in the website. Also you have to think about, if you want to make a flash or html website. If you make a html website, you can´t use that fonts in your content, because the fonts have to be installed on the users mac or pc. So you should use Verdana or Arial for example. Also you should devide the tabs into an active, inactive and mouseover state. How would they look like ? Check some site from guys with the same interests. Also you can look on websites on www.thefwa.com, of course the most websites there are crazy and there was much time spent on it, but perhaps you can get some imagination for your website.

cheers,
nacho

[Dkersys]

Design (http://u.stats.lt/i/20090812225625/Design4.jpg)

Say everything that this design doesn't and and what it needs. I'll learn from it. Please, no short answers, thank you!

[Dkersys]

I'll take another try.

http://u.stats.lt/i/20090817022253/new.jpg

[Kirt]

We're not really a web design site. You may find more help if you went to a site that specialized in this type of work. Also, please don't start a new thread for the same subject. Update your original thread so other people can track your progress.

[Dkersys]

http://u.stats.lt/i/20090902190302/Pavyzdys%20copy2.jpg

http://u.stats.lt/i/20090902202852/Pavyzdys.jpg

2 versions. I can't decide which one is better. An early thanks for poster :) Hope I get help from you. Don't look at the text language. It's Lithuanian language.

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