Futuristic suit

[paulreiss]

Nice work on the suit design. I think there might be some minor proportion issues here though. Her right arm seems a little short, and I think it may look a little more natural if you broaden her shoulders a little bit. Also, I would strengthen her contrapposto slightly.. good work so far.

[Andrei-tR]

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[Andrei-tR]

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[Outlawstar8489]

Hey I think this latest version is working really well, Im digging it, nice gun design too.

I cant help but feel shes still slightly out of proportion, either the legs are too big or the waist is to small, but at the same time its not a huge issue and could be seen as working for the image.

I think the armour looks cool and the helmet too, though I think it would also be nice to express a little more feminity in her breast area and helmet, something about the helmet just makes me feel like theres a guy in there, if you get my drift, but hey thats just me.

Looking forward to the final version.

[ColouredSky]

Hello =]

I see wonderful progress here - the figure's very well drawn. A tip from me - since your light source is behind the subject, you should highlight the edges of the suit to show that.

Have a nice day :cool:

[Outlawstar8489]

Hello =]

I see wonderful progress here - the figure's very well drawn. A tip from me - since your light source is behind the subject, you should highlight the edges of the suit to show that.

Have a nice day :cool:

I was gonna say that too, and you should at least try it, however I just feel the piece is fine without it, your call.

[Andrei-tR]

It's my new idea about this )
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8388/mainpunk5678.jpg

[ColouredSky]

Hello again Andrei =)

I see you've worked a lot on the image and it is looking great so far! I especially like how you built the suit.
I'll just mention some things that I think will make it look even better =]

As I said, I like the suit very much, but the almost pure brighter color seems a little off. The reflected light from the brown parts would naturally add some more (beside those you've already painted) brownish hues to the brighter parts and vise-versa. And secondly, I still stand behind what I wrote in my previous post - you should add some more highlights on the edges in order for the figure to bled in more with the environment.

I see you are a very good painter and you improve your images quickly and efficiently - I cant wait for the next update =D

[DArcy1]

Hi there

I have to say, and I hope I don't offend, that you've really lost the spark, the drama of your 1st image. To me the most recent update is, well, just blah. In your shoes I'd add the chest/neck of your 2nd image to the 1st, get rid of those blue beams of light, and then sit down and detail the 1st one.

Cheers

D'Arcy

[Andrei-tR]

Yes, i agree with you and i accept your opinion, but i wanted to make female character definitely and i've worked a lot on this. After i lost my picture's atmosphere because i have really changed my work many times. Now i'm trying to make more dark atmosphere from my past picture.

By the way, i prepare this work for my main comic page and i made this pictures for A4 format.

Thank you for advices.

[do-re-my]

I like the last one better. Fresh, and now.
The dark theme is really getting old.
Here mouth is not my type, as is her lower face... that just my taste.

[Andrei-tR]

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http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/1452/mainpunk12.jpg

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