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Elentor
07-31-2009, 10:36 PM
Hello there! This is a concept I started some days ago of a Transport Ship.

I'm in the process of coloring it. I'll appreciate suggestions and criticisms.

http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/2020/blockadeblackwhite.jpg

Thanks!

Elentor
08-01-2009, 04:29 AM
Update:

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/5742/blockaderunner6.jpg

noaah
08-01-2009, 09:03 PM
Good work so far, looks very complicated. Love the coloring.

Rutts
08-01-2009, 09:49 PM
Nice i like the style - reminds me of starwars

Elentor
08-02-2009, 11:32 PM
Hey, thank you very much for your comments :)

I'm looking for criticisms and tips on how to improve the concept. In the meanwhile I made two other concepts:

http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/5933/fighters2.jpg

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/5794/cruiser5.jpg

Rutts
08-02-2009, 11:56 PM
It's hard to crit these concepts as they are just concepts - but usually with vehicles you can use perspective or 'camera' angles to exaggerate size and make it more interesting.

But as i say it's hard to crit these because i like them as they are - unless you are oging to make them in 3d then i would say parts are too complicated and intricate

bbob
08-10-2009, 01:42 PM
imho the complicated and intricate parts is what appeals to me as a 3D artist, we love the nuts and bolts.. hehe

PieJesu
08-10-2009, 07:25 PM
I agree. Complication isn't bad now that we can bake details into normal maps without adding more geometry to the base mesh.

If it's not going to be a game asset then, even better.

The sillhouette on these is a bit complicated at places but, nothing that current generation engines can't handle.

Elentor
08-10-2009, 10:15 PM
Thank you for the feedback guys :) I made some slight alterations in the two later concepts:

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/939/fighter4.jpg

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9849/cruiser6b.jpg

Ingraban
08-10-2009, 11:48 PM
I especially like the smaller ship, the design is great and the details are awesome!

However the right turbine? looks somehow perspectively wrong.
I hope that helps:
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z179/IPDis/Skizen/fighter4op.jpg

Elentor
08-10-2009, 11:58 PM
You're right, the perspective is wrong, I should redraw the left wing. I made the ship originally just as a free-form sketch, so I didn't pay as much attention to it as I should.

JCork
08-11-2009, 12:24 AM
The coloring on the Transport Ship looks really good. I definitely like the simplistic style. It still gives off quite a bit of information.

As far as your other concepts, I'd like to see these touched up and finished. Obviously they are first drafts, but have potential. Really nice work!

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