...What have I done!!, Juan Jiménez (2D)

[ajsa51]

This is really funny. Good job. All he need's is a bunch of golden bananas in his left hand.

[phoenix]

Juan, this is really neat work, i really liek the way its painted, seriously lovely piece. i think ajsa51 has given a nice idea. but its all good



Regards

[Michael5188]

Overall the painting is incredible, but there are a few tangents bothering me.

The tangent from the mouse's screen right cheek and the ape's fist.

The bottom of the giant ape and those points on the wall are barely touching in various places. (plus I'm not sure why he's holding that chain)

Finally the spear flying above the mouse towards the screen is forming a bit of a tangent with the ape's loin cloth, plus the value/colors are similar. (and it looks like the ape is looking at the spear as opposed to the mouse)

It's so amazing, but my eye keeps going to those spots as they break up the flow a bit. Otherwise I'm just blown away, I love the rendering, poses, faces, just great work all over.

[omegus]

Thank you guys! Very nice critics:) Actually i wanted to add a stolen treasure in one mouse's hand, but it didn't work although i tried at least 10 different spots. I'll check out those tangent elements to improve the flow!

[PC]

Awesome work..made me chuckle..Great on expressions..Love this one for sure..:applause:

[olive2d]

Nice! funny! original perspective!!!
Yeah! love it!

[Fahrija]

the perspective is awesome! I also like the color mood and the different face expressions are very cool, too. congrats, the hours of work definitely paid off.

[KIDI]

Great work and perspective :applause:
i think the mouse is too bright .

[lordbiernac]

love it!!! :)

[victorior]

Love!! Love!! Love

[farhquad]

You are not THE Juan Jimenez, are you?
Not that I'm saying that your work isn't amazing, it's just that it was such a coincidence that you have the same name, are a talented illustrator and are Spanish...

I thought it was a real big change in style if you were to be the same one. :)
I guess you know him but just in case. He's been one of my favorites of all time:

THE OTHER JUAN JIMENEZ (http://www.juangimenez.com/caratula.html)

Hope you like it if you didn't know him.

Nevertheless, great work you have up there.

Cheers,

:: santi ::

[dman3d]

Love it, great job

[far]

very nice work :)

[Djampa]

:D

Very cool piece, nice action shot you got here.
Everything looks very good :) Enjoyable piece.
Congratulations

[Zeoyn]

It looks really cool!
Congratulations! :applause:

[goon_creative]

Monkey island...is good skill here:thumbsup:

[succuby]

yey good work. makes me remember LOTR, the minas tirith part when merry or pippin push a bucket into the pit.

[kurios]

excellent composition, great colors !

[rownd]

LOL "a bunch of golden bananas" would be a fantastic touch.

[Ollarin]

Great composition and colors! Love his expression too!

Awesome work mate! Really like this piece!

[3dj]

Beautiful work! I can hear the theme music from Raiders of the Lost Ark ...

The composition is absolutely TOP NOTCH! Well done!

-Jim

[TrueOG]

You are not THE Juan Jimenez, are you?
Not that I'm saying that your work isn't amazing, it's just that it was such a coincidence that you have the same name, are a talented illustrator and are Spanish...

I thought it was a real big change in style if you were to be the same one. :)
I guess you know him but just in case. He's been one of my favorites of all time:

THE OTHER JUAN JIMENEZ (http://www.juangimenez.com/caratula.html)

Hope you like it if you didn't know him.

Nevertheless, great work you have up there.

Cheers,

:: santi ::

Juan Jimenez is a very common name in Spain and other spanish speaking countries (as I think you know due to your name). As common as John Smith can be. Also notice that THE OTHER JUAN JIMENEZ is not spanish but argentinian.

I like very much the style and overall look of the illustration. My only crit is that the main character is a bit overexposed for my taste (as someone said before).

Regards.

[kube]

Amazing work. Great job!

[Coldframe]

amazing dude
ConGratulationS
best regards
:)
IsmaiL .

[omegus]

Thank you all guys!

First time in 2D choice award gallery, i'm really excited! Didn't expect it...
No, i'm not that Juan Gimenez. Note that his surname begins with letter G, but it's a nice coincidence, and he's actually argentinian.

About the crits:
- the mouse is too bright, but in part cuz i did it purposely. It could be better integrated in the image though.
- i already 'fixed' those tangents, and the 'new' version is available at my blog omegus.blogspot.com (http://omegus.blogspot.com), but you won't find much differences on it :)

Thank you again for the feedback!
Cheers

[Makushiro]

Good Job ,i really like the colors, but for me the face of "rat" (or rodent) needs more shadow.
Because the contrast is too-much intensify between face and background !

I'm sorry in advance for my approximately english!

[ricefarmer]

Overall the painting is incredible, but there are a few tangents bothering me.

The tangent from the mouse's screen right cheek and the ape's fist.

The bottom of the giant ape and those points on the wall are barely touching in various places. (plus I'm not sure why he's holding that chain)

Finally the spear flying above the mouse towards the screen is forming a bit of a tangent with the ape's loin cloth, plus the value/colors are similar. (and it looks like the ape is looking at the spear as opposed to the mouse)

It's so amazing, but my eye keeps going to those spots as they break up the flow a bit. Otherwise I'm just blown away, I love the rendering, poses, faces, just great work all over.

your gallery is pathetic to be giving anyone critques

[shadermonkey]

wow! so fun and dynamic. Great Job :beer:

[Zaum4n]

I really like the perspective and the motions of the rat-guy.
just the gorilla right above the rat-guy... i dont know maybe I'm
just blind but i dont quiet understand his left arm...
anyway
looks great!
and funny ^^

[picksel]

realy fun, love it

[KarelWolf]

very nice.

But I think Rat Jones face is to bright in comparison to the rest of the drawing. :lightbulb
although i belive you did that on purpose to highlight his expression.

An other thing is the speer on the left, i think it disrupts de link between the creature jumping down and Indiana Ratatouille. I see that Michael5188 (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=37282) already made this remark. sorry.

[tariktoon]

Awesome man...its tremendously awesome... :bowdown:

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.