My first car

[mwkmn]

It's great, considering it's your FIRST car, which looks 10000+ times better than MY first one :p

Anyways, I'll list out some things I think are odd.

-Headlights are very 'square'
-The side glasses are...wrong. The front two pieces could be joined together. However, if you are attemting to model it that way, go for it!
-The car is overally oddly proportioned. The hood and deck could be longer, and try to 'bring up' the bottom of the car, since it is very low now.

As for detailing, try extruding/chamfering the faces for details on the surface, and to smooth out the whole mesh, you need to detach the parts and make the seams. Try reading 'Making of R390 GT1' found in 3dtotal.com. It'll help you big deal IMO.

Sorry if I sounded too harsh :blush:
And good luck! Keep it coming! ;)

[Zanmato]

A cracking start for your first car.

You'll find a couple of tutorials on 3dtotal that will help you out with the detailing and textures. You've got a good base to progess it into something great so keep going with it and post updates.

Good work! :thumbsup:

[Tekspdy]

lol! It's very wierd looking, but overall a cool design. Some hinters on to give it a sleeker look... stretch it a tad and lower it a tad, also change the wheel wells so they dont cover the wheels so tightly... Cant wait to see more progress!

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