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PinkSherbet
07-29-2009, 07:56 AM
Hi everyone, my latest animation. Been working on this for awhile. Hope i can get some critics from you all.

http://www.vimeo.com/5797333

I hope the clip is long enough to spot mistakes, I put the side, front, and perspective view in one clip.

Thanks!

PinkSherbet
08-03-2009, 03:32 PM
I make some minor changes to the swinging of the arms and leg movements.

http://www.vimeo.com/5905954

C&C are welcome.

Thank you

Torr
08-03-2009, 08:34 PM
I think that his torso is very stiff. Maybe add a bit more of a twist when he walks.

theskydreamer2003
08-04-2009, 08:47 PM
your keys are to equal, favor one of them when u do the inbetweens, and ad some more elasticity. drag some, add follow-through (body extremes)
a great rule of animation says that there is no such thing as all parts starting and ending the motion at the same time... this is why your clip is so "un-organic"
walking is a perpetual falling and regaining balance, i don't see that
hip and shoulders rotates to
head is so stiff i cant even say it
u got the picture... continue animating cheers

PinkSherbet
08-07-2009, 05:17 AM
Thanks for the critics! I agree abt the torso part, didn't really thought about. I will work on it, and update soon. Abit tough on the head, but i will do my best. :bounce:

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