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Madison

07-31-2003, 01:30 PM

Hello Guys,

Just wanna get some feedback to try to improve my character, hope you can spend some time to drop me a line. I know something is not quite right of the proportion, i will probably spend some time on it. Anyway, just let me know what you think and anything i can improve. Thank you guys.

madison:hmm:

ALBEDO

07-31-2003, 01:44 PM

Try to give us a bigger rendering for the details to be more visible.

ALBEDO

Supervlieg

07-31-2003, 01:53 PM

Some points:

His waist is too thin, making hisbody look almost female
His knees are too high, making his upper legs seem too short
His upper arms are out of proportion, his biceps seem to be hanging down. I think his arms are a bit toolong overall
Perhaps his neck is bit on the thin side
His fingers could be a bit more massive, his hands look a bit bony now
His feet are a bit too small (they should be a bit wider)

Madison

07-31-2003, 02:10 PM

Thanks for your comments,
Here is another angle, have a look.
http://www.simplymaya.com/gallery/main_images_large/8436-77-large-hero.jpg

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