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PhilCraigie 07-31-2003, 07:47 AM http://www.philcraigie.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/remote/gardenfinal1.jpg
Created for the online novel "Aveara - An Empire Beyond Myst" (http://www.aveara.com) .
3dsmax5/Photoshop
Cheers
Phil:)
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elfling bard
07-31-2003, 08:01 AM
Wow...good as always. Nice to find you here.
I think it's really good like it is...nothing i think you can change!
Francois:wavey: :applause:
Intresting design!
The leaves that lies at the ground looks like they are floating, maby u should put some branch and change the color, and the backround, there the trees have strange colors as well.
The pillar on the right side looks good, but the pillars on the left, has to low detail in the texture, maby put some bump?
Hope it helped u:)
harly
07-31-2003, 01:48 PM
It has definitively that "MYST"-look.
The left pillars are somehow overlit ,you could add more contrast and shadows.
How did you generate the plants?
Cronium
07-31-2003, 01:55 PM
Looks really nice, and i agree on that MYST look! Maybe you could make the foliage on the "roof" a little bit more dense to make it look older and cosier :)
digitalshaman
07-31-2003, 03:31 PM
Hey phil :D
Its Tim :buttrock:
Everyone: Phil and I are both on the Aveara team.. Glad to see you here Phil :)
PhilCraigie
07-31-2003, 07:25 PM
How did you generate the plants?
Most are opacity mapped, the vines are done the same way with the scatter tool.
The leaves that lies at the ground looks like they are floating, maby u should put some branch and change the color, and the backround, there the trees have strange colors as well. Yeah in this res it isnt easy to see the vine branches, and the color of the trees was intentional, I didnt want them to look "of this earth" so I gave them a slightly "off" colour... honest!
Hi Tim, Francois......
Thanks for the comments
Phil:thumbsup:
Bussiere
07-31-2003, 07:50 PM
The composition is great, the level of subdivisions on parts of the fountain need to be increased. is the petal like base made of stone? if so it should look a little more robust. also I would add a little more dirt and variation to the surface of the flower pots, other then that you deserve an A.
Keep it up:buttrock:
ApocGFX
07-31-2003, 08:03 PM
I really like the lighting... Great job.
-Andrew
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