TaTu chick

[Shaykai]

great work man, i like T.A.T.U and you did them justice :)


Shaykai

[aenema]

great work :thumbsup: now do the other one :drool:

[malcolmvexxed]

As an adult who dates I don't find lesbians fascinating so I guess I'll be the one to critique the actual artwork, as this forum is intended for.

overall you have a good sense of proportions, especially in the face. The problems come mainly in the weight of some of the lines. For instance the use of sketchy lines to shade the cloth of her shirt, crosshatching to shade hair and a combination of the two to shade her skin make it impossible to determine texture. Also as a hint, crosshatching does not look good when the lines exceed the 45 degree mark in my opinion, unless you are intentionally making something look rough.

[starqueen]

agreed with those crits, the pen tip is also crooked

good use of color tho, its a good drawing, just not that interesting if you dont know who she is.

[godfatherwow]

thanks everyone.

To be honest, when i found her pic i didn't know who she was, all i know is that
she is very beautiful, and i have free time that day.
i see what you mean about the weight of the lines. I do need to lighten up on that.
About the crosshatching, I think that is just my habit.
Thank you for your critique, it sure helps alot.

Boy, that pen is way off.

Thanks, again everyone

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