Charater:Cooper

[Sammy]

neat! a really promising start - but I'd suggest posting a poly wire without smooth if you'd like any insightful C&C ...

Really diggin what you have coming with the ribs -- although I'
d suggest you re-examine it's proportions to your chest.
By my dry erase I put the ribs a touch lower

the outsides of the abs seem a little too hardedged for my liking.
are those the hips protruding up against the abs ?

the colarbones look okay from where I'm sitting -- the arms will decide their ends

a gentle 3/4 would great help us I believe.
Keep us all informed of your progress on this puppy - cool stuff!

_Sammy_

[Cooper]

Thanks i will=) Let me finish the back is in about a hour or so i'll post a few wires

:cool:

[Cooper]

http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP8.jpg

[ALBEDO]

Wow!

With those MUSCLES I can imagine what his pecker would look like after all these hormone pills. ;)

Good modeling work!

ALBEDO

[Cooper]

"With those MUSCLES I can imagine what his pecker would look like after all these hormone pills"

L.O.L


Well for a update im redoing his arms....they didn't seem ...well i didn't like them


thanks =)

-cooper

[Cooper]

okay i changed the arms i think these look alot better

http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP9.jpg
http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP10.jpg

[Cooper]

http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP11.jpg

[Cooper]

Now heres a Wire, But for all you quaders out there, don't worrie i always Quad my models

http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP12.jpg





-cooper

[Cooper]

ok heres a update, I made the head and connected the dots :p

http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP14.jpg

[Cooper]

You know :annoyed: i just saw the muscles on teh side of the arms look a bit big..i have resized them and ya can see them on the next update

[Cooper]

i did the legs lastnight:cool:

http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP15.jpg

[Cooper]

i tightend up the leg more for a update...but for some reason i can't take a snapshot...let me get this fixed or just wait till the next update :hmm:


Thanks
-Cooper

[Cooper]

no crits?:cry:

[ivo D]

well ..looking promissing.. but.. you got to the job to fast i think..

so ill just BLaat out some stuff i think could be tweaked..

the abz look to thick they have to flow more with the rest..
now they look extruded, no they aint but it look fake

the muscles on the side..now are like pieces of food sticking out.
they have to be longer and more organic also flowing under the skin,they mustend stick out..
i think you looked at bodybuild pics.. but those guys are oiled so dont let that light reflection fool you.

widen up the fase a little and make his arms more organic..

there are some wrickles in his chest musle i see.. oly the muscles flow up to the shoulder,so let the wrickles go that way t when they are in the middle of each breast.thats about it..

i didnt mean to offend you.. i just always say what i see.. not everyone does that :S


good work.. for poly by poly modelling:wavey:

[Cooper]

;) don't worrie none taken thanks for the advise

[KirkBjerk]

Well heres my 2 cents.....

Torso to hip doesn't look right, not sure if you noticed that but the width is not there, needs to be more of a continous line down, unless you're going for a cartoon style. Which in that case it wouldn't be a problem. Arms are maybe a bit bulky I completely agree with Ivo in saying the muscle mass needs to flow at bit more of an undertone. But these are you're first cuts so not bad at all, just some possible critiques :) lookin good keep it up, I'll be sure to keep yup on this thread :)

[KirkBjerk]

oh asnd the nipples seem a bit to large, almost female....

sorry had to mention that lol !

[Cooper]

Heres a update
http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP32.jpg

[JeffPerryman]

Great Googly Moogly!!!! That was quite a jump in prodution!!!! WOW! I can't wait to see where this ends up! :) Keep going!

[Cooper]

I'll post some wires later.....is this hard to see?
http://www.cooperr.com/stuff/CooperWIP34.jpg

[MCGrund]

Wow cool. Great Update.:applause:

[Cooper]

Thanks guys, im changing some stuff around like the gun
and the bracers....they was just fill ins:cool:

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