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mstl
07-30-2003, 05:38 PM
Hello all :beer: this is my first head... i need every crit by you.. be patient pls..thanks much..my english isnīt best

textured by my friend tes.

http://tes.euweb.cz/head.jpg

flamedevil
07-30-2003, 05:56 PM
That's very good for a first head, which software and what's your modeling method ?

Can we see a wire plz ?

mstl
07-30-2003, 06:23 PM
Software: 3D Studio Max 5.1
Method: splines modeling, edit poly modeling

IDownupI
07-30-2003, 06:27 PM
First head but not first model ehh? :D

mstl
07-30-2003, 06:47 PM
Here is wire picture.


http://tes.euweb.cz/wires.jpg

mstl
07-30-2003, 06:49 PM
IDownupI: yes....head is not first model :shrug:

seenote2000
07-31-2003, 01:17 AM
if this is really your first head then thats amazing? I still dont believe you.:eek: :scream: :drool:

mstl
07-31-2003, 07:25 AM
Im working i 3dmax for 2years,but i never tried to model characters.About two months ago my friend Tes started to learn me how to model characters and revealed me this part of modeling.He learned me many things and i thank for it to him.This head is a "finish" piece of my learning with him.Thatīs all.Iīm working for a year in a game developing studio as a modeller.

I started to model his space marine armor so first renders will be in few next days if everithing will go all right:))i wish that the armor will look as good as the head.

my english isnībest- i wish that you understand to everithing what i wrote here :)

ALBEDO
07-31-2003, 01:57 PM
Good work!

Try to reposition the ears. They also need some change in their form.

ALBEDO

Tarscher
08-01-2003, 10:20 AM
the pictures don' t show up

p0lym0rph
08-01-2003, 10:23 AM
i see red cross:cry:

mstl
08-01-2003, 01:15 PM
My ftp is offline for a while.

mstl
08-01-2003, 01:19 PM
is that all right? i copied the images to another ftp:thumbsup:

cgg
08-01-2003, 01:33 PM
very good 1st head :applause:
can yu show us the map plz:wip:

Bob27
08-01-2003, 05:56 PM
nice work man!

mstl
08-02-2003, 07:48 PM
here is a small thumbnail of a diffuse map.. enjoy
http://tes.euweb.cz/small.jpg

wesware
08-02-2003, 07:55 PM
Hey mistle

Great Head!
Nice usage of fewer polys.
2 questions/crits.

Are you going to animate the head? If so, you might want to tweak the direction some of the lines are flowing. Just to wrap the edges more in a fashion that they will be animated. Might save you some hassle later on.

I feel like you could use a few more poly rows around the mouth and the nose to help out with the creases and wrinkles you have created... they seem a little rounded right now, like you are using a few polys beyond their limit. But, of course, if you are animating the head then they will be more points you have to manipulate later on.

Good job!

mstl
08-04-2003, 02:27 PM
hi...i donīt like to animate this character ...it will be static scene...

tomG
08-04-2003, 04:08 PM
very nice work!!

just 2 crutiques. try to detail up the ear and reposition it. the crossover from the head to the ear doesen't looks natural.

take a bit more time to create your bump and color maps and detail them up! i'm in the same situation like you before you made this model ...... i don't have the courage to model a character :-(

keep going!

CuTnPaste
08-04-2003, 05:40 PM
hey man,
the ears have to be placed more up.... :)

check the eye line....

good work

cut

mstl
08-04-2003, 06:47 PM
the ears wouldnīt be seen-will be under a helmet.i used photos-front and side view for modeling so the position of ears is ok...i will modify them more.

:shrug:

TES
08-09-2003, 04:22 PM
what about to show us some armor prew?:thumbsup:

mstl
08-09-2003, 05:54 PM
Soon TES...soon :thumbsup:

blinxpro
08-10-2003, 03:20 AM
I would recommend having more attatching area of the ears to the head. They just aren't anatomically correct. Look at anyones ears or your own (in a mirror) and notice how they are connected over a larger area.

Excellent Job. Simply increddible.

blinxpro
08-10-2003, 03:24 AM
One more thing about the ears.

From the pictures you've provided, we can see that the ears arent identacle. The thickness at the top is too inconsistant.


Keep up the good work!!!

mstl
08-10-2003, 11:46 AM
hey guys...tnx for your replys! as i wrote before-THE EARS WOULDNīT be SEEN!! he will have some mask or a complex helmet.
:drool:

blinxpro
08-10-2003, 07:50 PM
Overlooked that part my apologies.


An A+ for sure!!!

When will you post with helmet/mask? Can't wait to see it.

jushra
08-10-2003, 11:28 PM
i remember getting my first head made, it was a bit messy. that looks good altho, i think that you could definately get some more detail in the textures.

mstl
08-11-2003, 11:37 PM
Armor W.I.P. :surprised

http://mis.euweb.cz/arm/armor.jpg

Larsen
08-12-2003, 12:17 AM
Good, it's beginning to be interesting.

:)

mstl
08-12-2003, 05:06 AM
Cipher: thx :cool:

LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR
08-12-2003, 11:52 AM
looking good , just one question i know its a stupid one but can you show me how u did the white eye , i am doing the same for one of my characters and would like to know how u did it , nice model by the way :thumbsup:

REZI-st
08-12-2003, 12:37 PM
yes yes is nice and interesting armor ;) :thumbsup:

mstl
08-12-2003, 02:11 PM
LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR:
heh:))) tnx much man! about that eye...i used Dosch design human eyes texture... i donīt now exactly what you like to know about this eyes.... they are modeled as real human eyes and they have only a small reflection- about 10-15... i used a HDRi map for reflection in the eyes.wish that you understand to me:) my english is bad. :surprised

REZI-st: thx my friend :beer:

LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR
08-12-2003, 02:47 PM
lol ok i thought it was HDRI but i mean the texture it self lol, :)

mstl
08-13-2003, 09:16 AM
LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR:

Do you like some closer images of the eye?

:wavey:

buzzlightyr
08-13-2003, 05:00 PM
Great head, feel he needs to see a better barbar tho

mstl
08-24-2003, 09:04 AM
buzzlightyr: barbar...no....sci-fi soldier...yes
:rolleyes:

buzzlightyr
08-26-2003, 01:05 PM
_mistle_ wwill there be a body or was your task just to make a head

mstl
08-26-2003, 05:32 PM
buzzlightyr:
i will do a body with some marine/space armor...now is this project stopped for a while:(i havenīt too much time to work on this...

:scream:

kiko3d
08-26-2003, 06:38 PM
Thatīs a topnotch model man!!
I like it, you did well signing it

mstl
08-27-2003, 05:42 PM
tnx much!i will try to get back to this model and continue on it

:shrug:

buzzlightyr
08-28-2003, 09:32 AM
ok man love to see it fully complete

TES
08-28-2003, 05:41 PM
going nice so far:thumbsup:

mstl
08-31-2003, 01:56 PM
TES: jo jo, my bubbles :buttrock:

mstl
08-31-2003, 05:16 PM
mz ftp with pictures is down :( sorry

mstl
10-18-2003, 06:20 PM
:(

mstl
10-18-2003, 06:21 PM
ftp is shut down :(

Ozzman
10-18-2003, 10:22 PM
WE NEED YOUR UPDATE :)) Nice work man. Muj nazor na tu hlavu znas -je to pasat ehm... superb

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