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Kirt
07-30-2003, 12:06 PM
I've been trying a couple portraits over on Eat Poo ... C&C would be nice as these are a bit different from my usual stuff. Well, at least they seem that way to me.

http://www.kirtstanke.com/images/lunaire.jpg

http://www.hazyskies.net/nyanko/real2.GIF << ref img

lunaire - 100% Photoshop. About 5 hours work.

http://www.kirtstanke.com/images/agnessas.jpg

http://www.hot.ee/pixdoll/3007/5.jpg << ref img

agnessas (caracture) - Pencil sketch & Photoshop colors. About 3 hours work.
Pancreas
07-30-2003, 12:26 PM
Both are great, you know how to show character in the eyes.
I like the more second one, itīs nearer to your style (and it shows in the work time) more comic, but with nice and realistic colors, and she looks as a girl I knew. The first one seems an achieved challenge to you, working directly in photoshop and aiming to photorealism.

:beer:
basse
07-30-2003, 12:56 PM
eat poo? hmm..

the second one I like, charismatic.. but the first one look somehow a bit weird.. perhaps the pose.. perhaps the proportions. head looks big, and heavy.

.b
summeralive
07-30-2003, 04:32 PM
take care of the figure on the first drawing....
2nd pic is good!






:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:
Kirt
07-30-2003, 05:51 PM
summeralive - What an insightful critique. Thanks for sharing 10 seconds of your time. In my future work I'll take extra "care of the figure" as per your suggestion. :rolleyes:

basse - Top of the head maybe a little heavy, but I think it has a bit to do with the camera angle. I noticed this also, but I think it adds to her gaze (she has a very focused look). I'm not trying to make an excuse for a flaw in my accuracy, but some errors I leave there intentionally.

However, no excuses for her left eye ... :D
I just didn't feel like trying to correct it anymore.

Pancreas - Yes, the first one was an attempt at getting away from painting 'within the lines' and keeping things loose and undefined (allowing the colors to define the form).
Bob27
07-30-2003, 06:00 PM
Great work!
cupcake
07-30-2003, 08:08 PM
VG. I agree left eye could be better.:)
starqueen
07-30-2003, 10:26 PM
gah! i love the second portrait, :beer: its like a characture!

:D
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