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Peter Pan
07-30-2003, 03:53 AM
Hello community,
These two characters are for a small animation project which I'm working on after hours. It is really interesting to hear what do you think about design/quality of these fellas.
I posted them on another BB, and was quite surprised by a strong negative critique on the second character. The most of the posts, though, were far from concise and basically asked for breast/heap/lip augmentations.

Peter Pan
07-30-2003, 04:11 AM
The plot of the animation is following:
the lead character obtains some supernatural abilities and starts fighting evil :) These two characters are his ubiquitous advisors, each saying something different. The question is - who would he listen? Unfortunately, I had to post them in greyscale. Probably should set up a web page for this projects. So for those guys who think the female char looks weird, please provide some explanation, because I must confess, I like her more (a bit) than angel :).

P.S. By the way, it's the first time I'm posting anything here :)

p0lym0rph
07-30-2003, 10:51 AM
hey,verry sweet modeling:thumbsup:

nat
07-30-2003, 01:18 PM
I really like the little angel, very cute and funny!

The girl, well she's supposed to be evil..and appealing
Her mouth is maybe too large and her body has strange proportions...Her chest is too long compare to her legs.
In other terms she should be more sexy...

Peter Pan
07-31-2003, 05:16 PM
Grand merci for comments, nat. I want to try to post the links to these images in color:
http://peterpan.250free.com/images/test_morphs.jpg
And the evil girl:
http://peterpan.250free.com/images/morph_test.jpg
Though I'm not sure how it will work. Angelfire (what a name, what a coinsidence!) states that it won't allow external links, but when I tried to generate a page with the links to those images, it looked fine. As for girl's proportions, I wanted to make them more 'childish', as I will show these characters together, they should be more or less similar in style. However, I will try to make some corrections (and actually this is a little bit old version of the model). Besides, I don't want to make her TOO attractive - she's evil, remember?

Peter Pan
08-01-2003, 09:02 PM
Hello? Is anybody here?

IDownupI
08-02-2003, 12:43 AM
nice i am wating for a Fun animation

jushra
08-02-2003, 03:19 AM
'so cool...give the baby guns and grenades...i mean, um, keep up the good work, keep us posted so we know when its all animated

Peter Pan
08-07-2003, 07:52 AM
Hello, fellas!
I decided to post a reference to my test animation of angel character, which could be fond Here (http://peterpan.250free.com/movies.html) in Divx format and takes only humble 1.8 Mb. Tell me what you think about it.
http://peterpan.250free.com/images/angel_movie.gif

Peter Pan
08-07-2003, 03:29 PM
eeeeee,
they removed my page :( Ok, tonight I'll try to find a better home for this project.

Peter Pan
08-08-2003, 06:55 AM
I'm crossing my fingers, links are functional now. Waiting for your opinions :)

Peter Pan
08-10-2003, 12:04 AM
Hello guys,
It is kinda I'm being ignored :cry:. Maybe this thread went down too fast. Bump!!!!!!!!!!!

blinxpro
08-10-2003, 02:41 AM
Don't cry peter. Looks good.

wok
08-10-2003, 04:46 AM
Hey Peter Pan, just checked out your animation test and it looks pretty good! However i think some of the morph targets may need a little tweeking. I also noticed the arms on the evil girl look a little weird, especially when there down?? maybe pull the underarm section down a little. :thumbsup:

Peter Pan
08-10-2003, 07:54 AM
I totally agree about endomorphs - as the test shows, some of them need to be exaggerated a bit. As for the girl - by the time I was making that image there was no rig, I Photoshoped the arms bent down :)

Peter Pan
08-31-2003, 01:35 AM
Hello CGtalkers, here is another test animation, this time - with the second character. 1.85Mb Divx, sorry for the low quality
http://peterpan.250free.com/images/deuce_movie.gif (http://peterpan.250free.com/movies.html)

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