Secret Agent Entry: Moustafa Mahmoud Abd El-Rahem

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The beginning

[evanescentdevil]

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The Station will the fight will be

[evanescentdevil]

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I will try to use the displacement in the end, my pc is so low, i hope it will allows me, hahaha

[evanescentdevil]

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Where They Will Go To Catch Him, We Will See What Will Happen

[evanescentdevil]

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I Don't Know, Am i Doing Well ?

[colagor]

looking good so far man, what kind of scene is going down here? i was just thinking that i actually prefer the textures in the second to last image, especially with regards to the tiles and columns, i think in your last one the dirt map on the tiles could do with breaking up a bit, for instance you could erase it away in the well trodden areas, so that you have kind of warn looking patterns? The columns are fine the texture just seems a little strong.

Keep up the good work!

[DarwinsMishap]

I think this is going fantastic-I love the textures you've done here, the second to the last will have to be my favorite as well. The last almost detracts from the depth of the decay, in my opinion. Can't wait to see what else you come up with!

[Ferx]

Really cool scenario, like a lot the lighting on it :D Good luck and waiting for more updates! Cheers!!

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He would be the spy, there r many ideas in my mind. created with MakeHuman, and i will create the face with FaceGen Modeller, and i will customize the character with Argile.

[evanescentdevil]

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The Spy Face, I Will Combine With The Body, Then Customize It With Argile.

[evanescentdevil]

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Cinema 4D Clothilde, I Will Upgrade It

[A3DLover]

Nice station scene with the lighting and textures.
I never really thought about using make human models.
good luck

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Working

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I'm Designing Some Thing Similar To The ZF-1 Gun

[evanescentdevil]

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I'm Working, Huf I'm Feeling Sick

[evanescentdevil]

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I'm Design Some Thing Similar To The Sentinel, Cuz Unforetunately i didn't find any blueprint for it. I will use my imagination hahaha

[evanescentdevil]

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It's So Sexy

[evanescentdevil]

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I Finished Rigging It, U Know After I Spend Rigging It, I Spend some Times Playing With It's Controllers HAHAHA, It's So Sexy, I Imagine If There Is The Ability To Design Any Thing In 3D, Then It Come True In The Real Life, Then I It Will Be My Sentinel, The SKU-IDE Sentinel, And I Will Sit On It And It Will Fly To Me To The Sky, It's Awesome To Have A Sentinel Like It.

[evanescentdevil]

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I made the expression with face gen modeller as anger, and the i made it deep in argile, like i made the neck muscles, the forehead anger shape, and the mouth, but i hope i did well, unfortunately i don't have tablet, hahaha

[evanescentdevil]

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I styled the hair using the comb tool,i made the direction on a spline mode, then i made some cuts on the hairs and customize them with the brush tool. that spy has 75000 hairs on his head that takes long time in rendering hahaha.
i created the UV Hair Growth Map With BodyPaint, that wasn't easy cuz i don't have tablet screen, then i fixed the texture with Gimp 2, i didn't use PhotoShop, Cuz I work on windows 7 , and the PhotoShop still not compatible with it.

[evanescentdevil]

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That Is The Spy That Will Be Detected In An Old Place By The Skuide Sentinel In The Machine City. I don't know, i feel that the clothes r not symmetrical, some one tell me his opinion, Plz ?. the hair numbers looked so little after rendering, then i searched for the number of hairs on human head, and i have found this answer "the number of strands of hair on a human head varies with color: BLONDE - 140,000 strands; BROWN - 110,000 strands; BLACK - 108,000 strands; RED - 90,000 strands" , So I Will Increase The Number, Cuz he is poor, he has 75,000 Hairs only hahaha >>>

[DarwinsMishap]

Howdy!

Nice progress, first off. The proportion of your agent in the hallway is spot on. I'm interested to see how large your mechanical 'bad guy' will be in comparison! May I suggest possibly adding some organics into your 'sentinal' to change it up a bit?

The hair so far looks good; it's slicked back so the thickness of it really isn't an issue. My Yakuza has 500,000 hairs! :D But that's because you can see the style instead of slicking it back!

Clothing proportions....? Let's see. The trench looks definitely long enough, broad enough in the back and lower torso. The backpack has me bothered, though. I might suggest adding straps that wrap around your agent's waistline for stability purposes (though, it's not real life now is it? ;) ). Sleeves seem long enough. Can you do a displacement map for the wrinkles (every jacket has wrinkles, pulls, ect-especially at the seams) or add them into the model itself by tweaking the polys?

His pose seems rather stiff at the upper torso and especially the arms. Though the one extended should be stiff, the other may be a tad bit looser in the way it is hanging at his side, or even reaching out a fraction to add to the anger in his pose?

Looking good so far!

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I have made the pose of the sentinel, it wasn't easy, cuz there r 46 sphere null object controllersm that u have to use to make the pose. i hope it looks interactive.

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I Created The Lightning Image That I Will Use For The Lightning light only by the GI Global Illumination, And I Will Hide The Mesh Form Being Seen By The Camera By Using Cinema 4D Compositing Tag. Then I Will Add The Lightning Shape In After Effects On The Final Image.

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i still didn't put the sentinel under the NURBS, cut it tells me that there is not enough memory. i think i will render it alone, with a simle mesh to the scene, to cast shadows, GI and the rest. then i will add it as a layer on the final image.

[i3abden]

Looking good so far, however I'm concerened about your model placing. It looks like you elimenated the depth factor (IMHO) by placing them side by side.
Say let the sentinel comming from the entrance of the hall and the agent is standing right infront of the scene facing the beast and ready to deploy his weapon.
Anyways good luck ya man, can't wait for your next input :).

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when, i made the sentinel editable, then it have the ability to be render but with a little degree of NURBS, i still will use layers to fix that. my friend Karim give me his flash memory to us it as a readyboost cached memory. thank u my friend. it helps me but i still need more memory, i will looks at my save if i have, then i would go to buy a new flash memory, i hope that will help enough.

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I will add some steam

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I hope that i did well. u don't know every body, i was so angry before i sleep last night, cuz after i add the thinking particles and add to them the volume tracer to make the steam, then when i go to render in the active view, it was taking about 45 minutes, and that was so bad that get me so so angry cut i wasn't be able to render that, but today i removed them and i created that steam with the advanced render glow effect and i tried to make it looks like real as much as i can, Cinema 4D is so sexy hahaha. that spy suppose to be in some where in the machine city, so why that steam in the air, cuz they r huge machines that works on electricity that produce O3 from the air, like Ozone. that is y the luminance in that steam,cuz that spy will transmit electrical lightning from his gun that i will add with After Effects.

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i will try to change the character so fast

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I think i will add to him body armor

[Kerem]

Very happy to found another Cinema 4D user on this contest. Too many max/maya/zbrush monopoly out there...

Keep up the beautiful work! I like your ideas and composition!

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i will try to complete it so fast, and i will exchange the face

[evanescentdevil]

Looking good so far, however I'm concerened about your model placing. It looks like you elimenated the depth factor (IMHO) by placing them side by side.
Say let the sentinel comming from the entrance of the hall and the agent is standing right infront of the scene facing the beast and ready to deploy his weapon.
Anyways good luck ya man, can't wait for your next input :).

Yeah, thanks , that is better i will change the pose of the sentienl,and i have changed the character, but i think i have to add more light in the enterance, also i think i have to make that steam little in some kind hahaha

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I finished the new character, i will remove the old one, i hope that the new one is better.

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Please, i need comments

[diissar]

nice work,your monster looks like the one in Matrix,try changing the colors to make it different,and try to add more depth to your image
good luck!

[evanescentdevil]

nice work,your monster looks like the one in Matrix,try changing the colors to make it different,and try to add more depth to your image
good luck!

YH, thanks , it's just looks like that monster, but it's just similar to it, cuz it's a different thing, the body is not like that one in the matrix also it has 16 arms that one in the matrix has little than that. unfortunately i can't change the depth, u don't know what did i do to render my image. i work on a a low pc, so low. i was pending about 45 mins to render the image then it cames in the end and say to me not enough memory, the i try to reduce the render and began to render again, and it tells me the same, untill i find the lest way to render ahahahha u don't beleive how was that , it was to render every object alone with 1600*900 resolution with low GI . then i try to collect those images i render separately in one image. hahah i took about 2 days and half to be able to render this image on my pc, i just hope i will win

[evanescentdevil]

actually it's the first challenge in my life i join, and i want to say y did i joined it and my hope. i don't know if they do that in the challenges or not, but i will do , i think there is no problem.
Actually i'm 17 years old and in august 18 2009 , i will reach 18, and i finished the high school since i was 16, i'm egyptian, live in egypt . i live that life that no one appreciate me in it, and i love 3D so much, and u don't know what my family do to me and how much the try to force me to leave the 3d or any computer things, cuz they don't believe in techonlogy and they just want me to do what they just want, any way i think it's not good to continue, cuz that seems like i'm complaining, but that is just my life. i joined the challenge cuz i really to win expensive prizes, cuz i want to get out from here and have money to travel and learn really 3D to be professional, and prove my self to the world . u all people must know or must know my now that there r some geniuses that live in the 3rd world, and they suffer there cuz of other's mind thoughts and beliefs, and they just need to be in the right place, the place where people appreciates the minds that search for knowledge. any way what ever happen i want to say that i will continue my way and never stop or break down what ever happen and u all people mu know that i'm the one that will be the best 3d designer and artist in the universe and also the most intelligent human mind that born in all humans ages. and don't think that i'm ego, i'm just telling u the fact u will find it in the future, when u will remember my words that i have said.
i love u all people , i hope i will win and appear so fast on the Earth.

[evanescentdevil]

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Software: After Effects,BodyPaint,CINEMA 4D,GIMP

Y we say on this life that it's the real life? how can we know ? is that cuz we just realize it ? could if be fake ? did u follow ur desires before any kind of them ? did u thought before that ur obsession is a real ? - that spy detected in some where in the machines city in a kind of life > Who Will Win ?

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