Secret Agent Entry: Jean-Denis Coindre

[JiDy]

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Its my first concept to this challenge.
It s a rough but the story to secret agent will be arround the red chaperon.

[JiDy]

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Rough and search

[JiDy]

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[JiDy]

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So go on ...

[adrephil]

Hi Jean-Denis!

awesome to have you in the challenge!!:cool: ...wow i'm really liking your concept sketches! the one which grabs my eye is the one with the bridge. great perspective and love that samuari feel to it!! :applause: can't wit to see more :wip:

Karisa;)

[JiDy]

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Wip

[JiDy]

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I changed the canvas picture.
It s better to me.

[Sir_MuLoT]

Yo!

Great start, I like the new composition and the work on the car and left of the image. I'm longing for more details for the background and the explosion :)

Keep the good work going :bounce:

[Ferx]

Hey Jean-Denis,


Cool sketches ! Like the mood and enviroment on it. The vertical composition looks great and the raioning atmosphere is a cool touch! Good luck and waiting for more updates!! Cheers!! :beer:

[JiDy]

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The secret Agent will be a Woman

[JiDy]

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Wip03
I ll try to focus the agent

[JiDy]

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Details
All is painted

[djinx]

Nice work !
I like your picture's composition, you have a great artistic eye!
I can't wait to see the final version of your blade runners' style illustration.
I allready imagine the BG city full of screens, light and random advertisements !
Keep going on Dude, you gonna got It! :applause:

[JiDy]

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I am painting with a bigger brush to get a better render lighting and to erase some details.

[Rupy]

Love the colors and mood you get from the image, its looking good, nice job on the explosion and main character, looking forward to the details, cheers

Rupy

[JiDy]

Thanks for your comments.
I am working on details...

[Justame2002]

Awesome sketches man, looking forward to any updates

[JiDy]

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I changed the compo to set the character in foreground .To me the agent must be more important in my illu.

[JiDy]

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I worked my brush to
stylise the atmosphere.So I test a lot of things...

[ShogunWarrior]

Hi,


Looking good, it kinda reminds me ferx's scenery when she presses the button and the car explodes... Good work, can't wait to see it completed my friend, take care for now.

[JiDy]

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Details and Brush ... I will try to get a Paint Brush rough effect but to get some details to.

[JRBRAZ]

Nice style on brushes !!!

About the background/comp set, I prefer the previous version .. I think that "human building" is taking too much atention in the scene ...

[ChaseStone]

Love the simplicity of the girl's face its really nice

[JiDy]

Thank you guy! JRBRAZ - I will see what can I do for the human building. Thanks.
And Thanks ChaseStone.
I will try to not make an ultra futuristic mood with a lot of gears.
I want to make a paintbrush piece .
My goals is to get a little paint brush style and not get details everywhere.
But I work details somewhere

[Zeoyn]

THe girl is turning out great!
The loose style of the painting really adds to the feeling of the scene!
Good work! :)

[JiDy]

Thank you Zeoyn. Your illu is very funny. Nice work.
I will work this week on details.

[JiDy]

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I am working on details and brush again.
I will set electric Adds ...
I am working on the rain effect.

[JiDy]

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I am working on details, on rain effect.

[Imara]

Hey Jean. I really like the first concept with the woman walking away from the exploding vehicle. The fact that shes using an umbrella is a very nice touch. Some ppl might have thought it bad ass if she didnt use one. Adds character to the character. Im really liking this man. Keep it up. Cheers.

[JiDy]

I let the umbrella. The good compo is the last.
I am workin on the rose to more see that.
thanks for your comment Imara

[benlink]

Hi!
Perhaps you should add some detail under the umbrella, by making it slightly translucent...but really slightly...You could also reduce the red light on the left of the woman, the fact that she is a bit "surrounded" by this red light does not bring anything, according to me. It even tends to attenuate the important light source of the scene.
So, on the other hand, I'd like to see more of the explosion light on her.
And finally, I would get rid of the "human building" in the back.

Otherwise, I really love the rough style of your sketch, try to keep this feeling while detailing your image, The woman does not need much more detail, but I'd like to see more from this explosion!

It's getting really really really..........COOL!
Keep it up!

[JiDy]

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I am working details.

[JiDy]

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Again working in Prog... soon the last

[JiDy]

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I think , tomorrow I will finish so I must work quickly.

[JiDy]

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I will post my last illu this night.
I hope you like it.

[podperson]

I love the composition and subtlety. I'm kind of bored with all the "two guys with katanas killing three robots with rocket launchers" ideas.

I also like moving the figure to the bottom left (away from the explosion). I'd love it if there's a hint of reaction to the explosion -- a bit of a flinch.

Anyway, love the style, the idea, the composition. My favorite entry so far.

[JiDy]

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Software: Photoshop

So it s the end...
The dark woman is sinking in the black night.

[Ferx]

Hey Jean-Denis,

Congratulations for this cool image! Like the perspective, and the rainy mood is well achived, puts a vey atmospheric touch on your concept. Good luck !! Cheers!! :beer:

[JiDy]

ok, thanks guys for your comments.
Thanks and goodluck for everyone

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