View Full Version : Finished Work - Room
07-29-2003, 01:55 PM
I am posting a work of a finished room so that you can evaluate.
I used the 3dsmax5 and V-ray.
Thank you! :thumbsup:
07-29-2003, 02:18 PM
very detailed, love the textures
07-29-2003, 02:18 PM
Really good work:thumbsup: The lighting is good, but I think when you look from this view the TV, there won't be so clear screen, there will be more refraction, and everything is too clear.:applause:
07-29-2003, 02:21 PM
architectural. mmm ..
The right side of the image looks unbalanced. A bit too bright/white and the external image looks like it doesn't quite belong. It's the balance of the image. Half the room is colourful. The other, just blank.
The plant looks quite fake, plants tend to have a darker shade of green with a bit of sheen
The wall Painting should have a thickness. It looks like a piece of paper
I would say lose mos of the stuff on the table. TOo much clutter.
Lose the chaise lounge and the stereo.
The extreme top left white pillow is on just that wrong angle that it looks odd from your perspective. It looks flat there - like a 2d trapezium.
The DVD player is wayyy too small. The books are almost as big?
That's it I guess. Hope this helps! The render is very nice.
07-29-2003, 02:27 PM
the picture you used for the scenery outside is very very confusing though, makes me dizzy everything not horizontal
nice mat on the floor, cool texture, and make the tv's body darker, u never get a tv that light colour, it would distract from the pictures.
07-29-2003, 05:21 PM
Looks reall good so far... The things that I see are:
the planter looks far to reflective ...looks almost clear and from the perspective looks lower (under floor) than the TV table.
the hanging light, it looks ... I dunno, hard to say other than funny
does the TV stand sit flush on the floor or does it have legs ? it kinda looks like it is floating in air, also it has a "forward" looking shadow (away from wall) when you have a light comming in from the front (at angle toward wall) and from above (assuming light is on)
can't see any detail on the red plant in vase... kinda looks like a red blob
07-29-2003, 05:33 PM
hmmmm nice but....
i would, create a more balanced image, i like the white couch and its atmosfere. has a very clean feel to it. the television is a bit too much. that half of the room is very dense, and crowded.
i would try to make it either way completely like your white couch or the other way..
like it though......
ohja the pic outside is a bit weird...
but good work nontheless. nice render
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